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7Life's Unexpected Turns
Do not pay any mind to this question if it is wrong, but is it meant to sound somewhat similar to The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini? Perhaps not, for the situation of Jeff is clearly different to the protagonist... But, it is similar to an extent. Great story. Poor Jeff! It must have hurt so much. Danny must be killing himself with the guilt. Great portrayal of the characters.
7Life's Unexpected TurnsDo not pay any mind to this question if it is wrong, but is it meant to sound somewhat similar to The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini? Perhaps not, for the situation of Jeff is clearly different to the protagonist... But, it is similar to an extent. Great story. Poor Jeff! It must have hurt so much. Danny must be killing himself with the guilt. Great portrayal of the characters.
6/28/2012 c7 Guest
i like this couple,but this is the end?
i like this couple,but this is the end?
10/13/2010 c7 2whitefear
Oh my god, PLEASE CONTINUE :O I really like this one. I like Dan even if he was so stupid. I think though that you should be more in depth about his feelings, seems a bit distant. I still like it... :( please? I'll make you a cake? XD
2whitefearOh my god, PLEASE CONTINUE :O I really like this one. I like Dan even if he was so stupid. I think though that you should be more in depth about his feelings, seems a bit distant. I still like it... :( please? I'll make you a cake? XD
2/14/2010 c1 Nameless Shana
How could you leave your best friend like that T.T. And not only that, he got his ass kick and his 'friend' left him.
How could you leave your best friend like that T.T. And not only that, he got his ass kick and his 'friend' left him.
1/1/2010 c7 8TinaLouise
I always enjoy your stories. I'd be interested to see where this one goes if you still plan on updating it.
And, since it's just the beginning of the year here, have a wonderful 2010 and I look forward to all the new writing you'll (hopefully) put out this year.
Now if only I could get some of my stuff done...le sigh.
8TinaLouiseI always enjoy your stories. I'd be interested to see where this one goes if you still plan on updating it.
And, since it's just the beginning of the year here, have a wonderful 2010 and I look forward to all the new writing you'll (hopefully) put out this year.
Now if only I could get some of my stuff done...le sigh.
6/26/2009 c7 StangenBaer
8( Why do I see no update since '07?
Anyways, I really like this story, and you 'feel' for the characters! I feel bad for Jeff that he lost the ability to draw, but hopefully he can draw like he used to in the future!
Much love
~Stangy
8( Why do I see no update since '07?
Anyways, I really like this story, and you 'feel' for the characters! I feel bad for Jeff that he lost the ability to draw, but hopefully he can draw like he used to in the future!
Much love
~Stangy
6/7/2009 c7 lhbui2001
I especially like how the story is written. It's as if I can hear the protagonist saying things the way you write them. I am disappointed that you seem to have abandoned this story but it was still quite refreshing to read this as the prose is quite different from anything that I've read. I hope you will change your mind, or perhaps find your inspiration again for this story
I especially like how the story is written. It's as if I can hear the protagonist saying things the way you write them. I am disappointed that you seem to have abandoned this story but it was still quite refreshing to read this as the prose is quite different from anything that I've read. I hope you will change your mind, or perhaps find your inspiration again for this story
12/15/2008 c7 17JtheChosen1
awesome story! very different from what you have written before, but its still awesome! keep up the great work!
17JtheChosen1awesome story! very different from what you have written before, but its still awesome! keep up the great work!
2/10/2008 c7 kiki
please update!
please update!
9/17/2007 c7 Sheepie
I like this story, it was rather sad in the beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!
I like this story, it was rather sad in the beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!
3/20/2007 c7 6Onion Ring
I like how it is written and there are few grammar or spelling problems, if any. The dialogue is good, as the characters have some sort of slang... The only slight problem I have is that these first few chapters all seem to be a prologue. After the first chapter, the other 5 only speak about how Daniel wants to be forgiven while Jeff is recovering. It does not have much development except for Jeff's physical recovery and slightly clearing the mystery of who did this to him, but after these seven chapters, I (the reader) has yet to learn that much about the main characters. The last few lines though, it seems Daniel has slightly fallen for Jeff? It's quite cliche, but I suppose thinking of how he could have lost his best friend could have triggered that emotion, which is realistic... but from the beginning, Daniel has yet to admit hes gay... and now he is suggesting he is in love? That is what sort of bewilders me. It's still very good though... Continue!
6Onion RingI like how it is written and there are few grammar or spelling problems, if any. The dialogue is good, as the characters have some sort of slang... The only slight problem I have is that these first few chapters all seem to be a prologue. After the first chapter, the other 5 only speak about how Daniel wants to be forgiven while Jeff is recovering. It does not have much development except for Jeff's physical recovery and slightly clearing the mystery of who did this to him, but after these seven chapters, I (the reader) has yet to learn that much about the main characters. The last few lines though, it seems Daniel has slightly fallen for Jeff? It's quite cliche, but I suppose thinking of how he could have lost his best friend could have triggered that emotion, which is realistic... but from the beginning, Daniel has yet to admit hes gay... and now he is suggesting he is in love? That is what sort of bewilders me. It's still very good though... Continue!