for All We Know of Heaven2/6/2007 c1 
25avanfos
I love this so far. You do a great job in the Prologue of presenting the situation from a child's point of view. I'm looking forward to the rest of this.
The only criticism I can give is that there are a few spelling errors in chapter one, but don't we all suffer from it?
25avanfosI love this so far. You do a great job in the Prologue of presenting the situation from a child's point of view. I'm looking forward to the rest of this.
The only criticism I can give is that there are a few spelling errors in chapter one, but don't we all suffer from it?
11/11/2006 c3 1El-Burrito
I rather like this story. Joel is interesting and likable, although his age confuses me. I get the whole not-nine-anymore thing, but how old IS he? I like the girl too.
It's a really interesting start. Update soon!
1El-BurritoI rather like this story. Joel is interesting and likable, although his age confuses me. I get the whole not-nine-anymore thing, but how old IS he? I like the girl too.
It's a really interesting start. Update soon!
10/5/2006 c1 23Pink Cigarette
This sounds really interesting. Both parts, including the one about Amirah. Hmm, I shall be anticipating what happens.
Keep writing!
D.
23Pink CigaretteThis sounds really interesting. Both parts, including the one about Amirah. Hmm, I shall be anticipating what happens.
Keep writing!
D.
10/4/2006 c1 Mekou
O_O I love the little bit at the end! It is so well written. Keep up the wonderful work! ^_^
O_O I love the little bit at the end! It is so well written. Keep up the wonderful work! ^_^