for Sleep10/19/2006 c1 
19silverquill91
I really liked the structure and the emotion that you put in to this poem. its very deep. I really like the line..
"Dreams of what we're going to be and how we're going to live..."
Many people have asked me what I want to become, what I want to do with the rest of my life. Honestly, who in the world really knows that? I don't think I could ever know for sure who I want to be. Dreams, give you ideas about those kinda things.
By the way, thanks for reviewing my stuff!
Keep Writing!
~Silverquill91~
19silverquill91I really liked the structure and the emotion that you put in to this poem. its very deep. I really like the line..
"Dreams of what we're going to be and how we're going to live..."
Many people have asked me what I want to become, what I want to do with the rest of my life. Honestly, who in the world really knows that? I don't think I could ever know for sure who I want to be. Dreams, give you ideas about those kinda things.
By the way, thanks for reviewing my stuff!
Keep Writing!
~Silverquill91~