for That Essay That Everyone Else Writes4/11/2022 c1 AvaFjames
I honestly think that you are going to do great because your deadline is not near. How I wish I had that much time to complete my homework essay. Thanks to my mons suggestion I got someone to [ . /do-my-homework/]do my howmework for me cheap[/url] online. Anyways, I wish you the best and hope you get a good grade!
I honestly think that you are going to do great because your deadline is not near. How I wish I had that much time to complete my homework essay. Thanks to my mons suggestion I got someone to [ . /do-my-homework/]do my howmework for me cheap[/url] online. Anyways, I wish you the best and hope you get a good grade!
3/29/2022 c5 LostintheCycle03
Gotta be honest this short-story-essay had me chuckling, but it was a great way of writing it out. The medical situation fit perfectly. You seem apprehensive of it in your ending notes but it was cool!
Gotta be honest this short-story-essay had me chuckling, but it was a great way of writing it out. The medical situation fit perfectly. You seem apprehensive of it in your ending notes but it was cool!
7/19/2020 c9 Eli
Speaking of three-dimensional characters, for some reason I can't stop thinking about Undertale. Because there are various outcomes in the game, your choices make an effect on the characters around you. Because of that, the characters tend to have various dialouge. Even a simple NPC to the main boss just makes me feel they're actual characters, not just comic relief (I'm looking at you, Sans) or for the sake of the plot.
Interesting guide by the way :D
Speaking of three-dimensional characters, for some reason I can't stop thinking about Undertale. Because there are various outcomes in the game, your choices make an effect on the characters around you. Because of that, the characters tend to have various dialouge. Even a simple NPC to the main boss just makes me feel they're actual characters, not just comic relief (I'm looking at you, Sans) or for the sake of the plot.
Interesting guide by the way :D
9/6/2015 c12 
1Alex Rusanov
I found your essay series really helping. I would like to befriend the writer honestly :)
Thank you for writing this :)
1Alex RusanovI found your essay series really helping. I would like to befriend the writer honestly :)
Thank you for writing this :)
11/15/2014 c4 214everMagic
In my opinion what makes a good villian, is for them to have very simliar traits to the hero. For example the Doctor and the Master (I love Doctor Who). The Doctor and Master are both very simliar, what makes them different is their beliefs and views of the world. The Master shows the audience what the Doctor could have become. The same formula is used for Sherlock and Moriarty.
214everMagicIn my opinion what makes a good villian, is for them to have very simliar traits to the hero. For example the Doctor and the Master (I love Doctor Who). The Doctor and Master are both very simliar, what makes them different is their beliefs and views of the world. The Master shows the audience what the Doctor could have become. The same formula is used for Sherlock and Moriarty.
10/1/2014 c12 1NomNomTa
This is a very helpful essay thingy, I've been learning alot of stuff and it's also very fun to read this.
Please do an essay on magic because lots of Fantasy writers don't know how powerful it should be or that it shouldn't be an OP skill that you can just spam. I've been trying to figure out what you can and can't do with magic and I really don't know where to draw the line.
1NomNomTaThis is a very helpful essay thingy, I've been learning alot of stuff and it's also very fun to read this.
Please do an essay on magic because lots of Fantasy writers don't know how powerful it should be or that it shouldn't be an OP skill that you can just spam. I've been trying to figure out what you can and can't do with magic and I really don't know where to draw the line.
9/14/2013 c10 1frosted flaky
[World Building, Part 1: Language, Watch Your Tounge!]
*Tongue
Unless you meant to spell it that way.
1frosted flaky[World Building, Part 1: Language, Watch Your Tounge!]
*Tongue
Unless you meant to spell it that way.
2/22/2013 c4 12CorycianAngel1944
Nice, i like the essays. Yeah, sometimes it's impossible to think out of the box.
12CorycianAngel1944Nice, i like the essays. Yeah, sometimes it's impossible to think out of the box.
12/29/2012 c9 1autumnchase
Hi. I really like your essay but I don't really understand everything you said about the two eyes and how it compares to characters, and the sad part is this is my weak point and I really want to understand what you ment.
1autumnchaseHi. I really like your essay but I don't really understand everything you said about the two eyes and how it compares to characters, and the sad part is this is my weak point and I really want to understand what you ment.
11/13/2012 c12 Guest
Oh my god! Your are my enlightenment! Your essays all 12 chapters are going to help me develop my characters, and plot line so much. You are me hero and you, my dear, are a genius.
Thanks,
Iya
Oh my god! Your are my enlightenment! Your essays all 12 chapters are going to help me develop my characters, and plot line so much. You are me hero and you, my dear, are a genius.
Thanks,
Iya
8/14/2012 c12 Guest
Where's the rest? I am in desperate need of these Essays. You are doing good to all of ink kind. :P please update soon.
Where's the rest? I am in desperate need of these Essays. You are doing good to all of ink kind. :P please update soon.
8/9/2012 c5 Guest
I loved your essay,
I loved your essay,
4/11/2012 c3 A Harry Potter Fan
As a Harry Potter fan I feel the need to let you know that Harry and Neville were NOT born on the same day- just at the end of the month. Neville is actually July 30th while Harry is the 31st.
As a Harry Potter fan I feel the need to let you know that Harry and Neville were NOT born on the same day- just at the end of the month. Neville is actually July 30th while Harry is the 31st.
2/26/2012 c2 9PupPupPop
Dang, I'm a person who's very annoyed by cliches and Mary-sues. But one object of a story I haven't really though about are villains. After reading this chapter it really got my brain working on ideas of new villains. Thanks for that! :D
Going on to the next chapter! :))
9PupPupPopDang, I'm a person who's very annoyed by cliches and Mary-sues. But one object of a story I haven't really though about are villains. After reading this chapter it really got my brain working on ideas of new villains. Thanks for that! :D
Going on to the next chapter! :))
2/26/2012 c2 PupPupPop
Dang, I'm a person who's very annoyed by cliches and Mary-sues. But one object of a story I haven't really though about are villains. After reading this chapter it really got my brain working on ideas of new villains. Thanks for that! :D
Going on to the next chapter! :))
Dang, I'm a person who's very annoyed by cliches and Mary-sues. But one object of a story I haven't really though about are villains. After reading this chapter it really got my brain working on ideas of new villains. Thanks for that! :D
Going on to the next chapter! :))