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6/20/2010 c5 11watercolour dreams
Aw. Harry sounds so cute. Lol.

Nice poem. It flowed really nicely and worked really nice. I like your poetry. There's good variety to it. Keep it up!

And Harry the Canary is AWESOME. XD
6/20/2010 c4 watercolour dreams
Nice poem. It's interesting. I can't pick out exactly what it's about, but that just makes it that much more mysterious and awesome. Good work!
6/20/2010 c3 watercolour dreams
Nice. I like it. It's mysterious, yet intriguing and captivating. I love this part:

"Their shape, their meaning, their beauty/They're here with us, forever to stay."

I can't actually pinpoint what you're talking about in this poem, but that just makes it even the more interesting. A few of my ideas are: Stories (books, novels, etc. Just any writing), Poems, Cave drawings or things like that (You know, like pictures from the old times i.e. Egyptian. Lol. I don't know), Art and yeah... that's all I got. Anyway, I really like this poem. It's got to be one of my favourites so far. Nice work!
6/20/2010 c2 watercolour dreams
Nice poem. The sounds of life. It's really nice. And so true. Sometimes, you just have to listen. Nice work!
6/20/2010 c1 watercolour dreams
Wow. I like this poem. It's so true. I've just been through some tough stuff with friends being horrible and stabbing me in the back when they were supposed to be my best friends. I lost them, but gained another who's worth 10 of them. Anyway, enough about that.

I loved the ending. Conformity is both a curse and a saviour in a way, I suppose. Conform and you can make it easier to survive. But don't confom and you can do even better. You can escape. This poem really suits high school life. Girl world is torturous. I swear, guys are way easier to hang out with.

Anyway, nice poem. It's really good. I love the way you brought some themes all the way through and the ending was just like BAM. Awesome!
3/15/2009 c1 Wolf's Night
okay um oops. I totally didn't mean to hit submit right then. Right, so as I was trying to say I liked the first one a lot. The subject was well portrayed and I agree with the end conclusion. Conformity is definitely tough competition when it comes to not losing a friend to it.

I liked the repetition of some of the ideas throughout the poem and the fact that it was free verse while dealing with conformity was good subliminal hint (intentionally or not..it still adds strength to the meaning)

well done on all of them though, I just chose to comment on that one.

Wolf's Night
3/15/2009 c5 Wolf's Night
very cool. You have such a nice variation to your poetry. The last one definitely was lighthearted and a good end note for the collection though I must say the first is my favorite.

There doesn't seem to be much uniform structure, its more free verse which is why I think it works so well.
7/14/2008 c5 12AuthorLittle
Yes, you are definitely morbid! :(
7/14/2008 c4 AuthorLittle
What the deuce? Is this morbid? Haha, what is this thing the writer refers to?
7/14/2008 c3 AuthorLittle
Also interesting...but, lacking something to be really good. Idk what, though...not every poem has to be a masterpiece, no?
7/14/2008 c2 AuthorLittle
Hmm...interesting, perhaps more so to me than the average person as I am a musician ;)
7/14/2008 c1 AuthorLittle
So, I read your review on...grr...can't remember the author's sn, but 'The Ten Proposals'...anyway, I was like, who is this uber-cynical person? Haha, as I am also cynical I thought I should comment on some of your stuff, keep in touch when I need an honest opinion ;).

Well, this poem is...ventish. Haha, that's about all there is to this one. Not all that poetic, but venting stuff is good at times ;)
11/19/2006 c5 9Sally Can Wait
xD I loved the limerick. I also love the way your words flow together, as if they can rhyme without technically rhyming. It makes me feel all inspired to write poetry, even though I'm not even a poetry person. Brilliance, I say!

Anyhoodles, why yes, I am doing the HarperTeen fan whatever too! I'm so glad to know that someone familiar is doing it as well. :) Tell me the name of your chapter and I'll totally 5 it, just because we have connections like that. Mine are called "One Week" and "I Knew Dave Would Always Be There For Me-Even If I Had To Drag Him."

Bwahaha! Keep up your poetry! I shall be reading...

-Sally

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