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11/16/2006 c1 43Patricia Louise
Interesting format. I love this!
10/31/2006 c1 109ADSpencer
Oh, I love this poem. I recall reading it when you first but it up, but I suppose I didn't ever get around to reviewing. Anyhow, great work! Dramatic line cut-offs.
10/5/2006 c1 bread and circuses
Wow. That is really different - to what I was expecting, and to most other poems.

[Create your won reality]- You probably meant 'own'.

[allow chaos it’s/ Control] - Do you mean the control that chaos posesses? Because that would be 'its'. This means 'allow chaos it is control'.

I love the simplicity of the formatting. It makes the words that much more powerful. Great poem!
10/5/2006 c1 16Frogalog
wow. really nice. really unique. i liked the simplicity. it made it pretty in a strange way. good job.
10/5/2006 c1 4autumnmurder
Well done! I like the way you wrote this. :)

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