for Manda Rider 7: Blood Retribution8/14/2014 c25 
9NovemberRose1
You have to continue! You're brilliant! It takes a mastermind to make up all of those interesting characters and to create all those plots and secrets that the readers don't know about until the end! I do admit though, the grammar needs help. But I only say this because I think you have any of talent. I wouldn't even comment if I didn't like your work. Please come back because we need to see what happens with Ellis Summers, and with manda and Michael, to see their marriage, to see her graduate, to see her join the FBI, etc, etc, etc. lol.
9NovemberRose1You have to continue! You're brilliant! It takes a mastermind to make up all of those interesting characters and to create all those plots and secrets that the readers don't know about until the end! I do admit though, the grammar needs help. But I only say this because I think you have any of talent. I wouldn't even comment if I didn't like your work. Please come back because we need to see what happens with Ellis Summers, and with manda and Michael, to see their marriage, to see her graduate, to see her join the FBI, etc, etc, etc. lol.
11/15/2010 c25 6Van Quatra
this is a review for all 7, they were excellant, i couldn't stop reading to review the others, it was excellent, i hope you think of more to do with manda. i mean i want to know if she joins the FBI, i mean who wouldn't want to know, like i said great job
6Van Quatrathis is a review for all 7, they were excellant, i couldn't stop reading to review the others, it was excellent, i hope you think of more to do with manda. i mean i want to know if she joins the FBI, i mean who wouldn't want to know, like i said great job
4/10/2007 c25 murderprotocol
I'm really sorry I haven't been reviewing. I've been sick and, well, that's probably nothing you're concerned about hearing.
But I loved this. The last few chapters were amazing. Totally action packed. That whole ring with was such an incredible twist, I didn't even think something like that was possible. And Alex! Poor Alex, I was kind of looking forward to see more of her.
When it was shown that Jason was the killer, I was like, yes, one for me! Because I always did suspect him, lol. When you made it appear Damien was dead I was so upset, but luckily he was okay, and his usual skirt-chasing self by the end.
OMG, when Manda was stabbed, I freaked. I totally felt Michael's anger and wanted to shoot Jason too. But I'm glad he had the self-control to know it wasn't worth him getting in trouble. Although, I was a little surprised he avoided Manda the way he did. I guess they're both stubborn - I wanted him to just tell it straight to Manda about the accounts, and he never really did. I mean, there's that whole thing with what Jason said to Blake about it... I guess it might come up in a future story.
But yes! They're still going to get married. I really wish Manda would just say it, you know. She's all stuck on her 'trust no one but me' soapbox, she can't even see she has an awesome guy on her side.
Anyway, thank you so much for the great read, and good luck with your work and future writing endeavours. If there will be more Manda stories, then I'll read, whenever they're ready.
I'm really sorry I haven't been reviewing. I've been sick and, well, that's probably nothing you're concerned about hearing.
But I loved this. The last few chapters were amazing. Totally action packed. That whole ring with was such an incredible twist, I didn't even think something like that was possible. And Alex! Poor Alex, I was kind of looking forward to see more of her.
When it was shown that Jason was the killer, I was like, yes, one for me! Because I always did suspect him, lol. When you made it appear Damien was dead I was so upset, but luckily he was okay, and his usual skirt-chasing self by the end.
OMG, when Manda was stabbed, I freaked. I totally felt Michael's anger and wanted to shoot Jason too. But I'm glad he had the self-control to know it wasn't worth him getting in trouble. Although, I was a little surprised he avoided Manda the way he did. I guess they're both stubborn - I wanted him to just tell it straight to Manda about the accounts, and he never really did. I mean, there's that whole thing with what Jason said to Blake about it... I guess it might come up in a future story.
But yes! They're still going to get married. I really wish Manda would just say it, you know. She's all stuck on her 'trust no one but me' soapbox, she can't even see she has an awesome guy on her side.
Anyway, thank you so much for the great read, and good luck with your work and future writing endeavours. If there will be more Manda stories, then I'll read, whenever they're ready.
3/18/2007 c1 73aims80
I really like this so far and hopefully I can get around to reading the rest of what you've got up here tonight or tomorrow.
73aims80I really like this so far and hopefully I can get around to reading the rest of what you've got up here tonight or tomorrow.
3/12/2007 c18 murderprotocol
Well, I'm late to review again. This time I didn't have my computer, haha.
I loved that whole interaction between Manda and MacQuaid. It was very realistic, considering the type of person MacQuaid is. I'm curious to know what Byron's up to though. His final words were very ominous.
I swear it was the candy that was tampered with - which makes Alex (?) a suspect again. Or someone put it there and she happened to deliver it to Manda. Hmm, the possibilities.
Amy's reaction to Manda questioning Adam was awesome. Hopefully Manda might learn a few things, although knowing her, I highly doubt it. The girl's just too stubborn.
I'm still suss about Jason. I probably say that all the time, but I really don't trust the guy. Which in a way is ironic, because Manda seems to. And awesome cliffhanger! I can't wait for more now! I hope Alex will be okay... if not, then... the mystery thickens.
Great stuff, as always. :)
Well, I'm late to review again. This time I didn't have my computer, haha.
I loved that whole interaction between Manda and MacQuaid. It was very realistic, considering the type of person MacQuaid is. I'm curious to know what Byron's up to though. His final words were very ominous.
I swear it was the candy that was tampered with - which makes Alex (?) a suspect again. Or someone put it there and she happened to deliver it to Manda. Hmm, the possibilities.
Amy's reaction to Manda questioning Adam was awesome. Hopefully Manda might learn a few things, although knowing her, I highly doubt it. The girl's just too stubborn.
I'm still suss about Jason. I probably say that all the time, but I really don't trust the guy. Which in a way is ironic, because Manda seems to. And awesome cliffhanger! I can't wait for more now! I hope Alex will be okay... if not, then... the mystery thickens.
Great stuff, as always. :)
3/3/2007 c17 murderprotocol
I can't believe someone would frame Michael! It's funny that he's being charged, yet Manda's dad just called her. Hm. As for Alex, I'm still unsure whether to trust her or not... and I'm beginning to really suspect Jason. Why, I don't know, but it's the only thing that makes sense right now.
I just noticed one thing. You started off saying MacQuaid, then called him MacBrady, then went back to MacQuaid. I wasn't sure if that was a mistake, or intentional. :)
Looking forward to more.
I can't believe someone would frame Michael! It's funny that he's being charged, yet Manda's dad just called her. Hm. As for Alex, I'm still unsure whether to trust her or not... and I'm beginning to really suspect Jason. Why, I don't know, but it's the only thing that makes sense right now.
I just noticed one thing. You started off saying MacQuaid, then called him MacBrady, then went back to MacQuaid. I wasn't sure if that was a mistake, or intentional. :)
Looking forward to more.
2/17/2007 c16 murderprotocol
Man, Manda needs to learn not to end up in hospital all the time. And her and Michael really need to make up already, haha. But damn Kathy, taking Manda's wallet looking for a credit card? Who does she think she is? I get the feeling she's up to something, but it could just be a red herring.
I totally suspected the candy and I forgot about the sticker for a minute there, but they were nice little twists. Plus I always did suspect Adam. And Manda's dad calling her, whoa.
And Michael being arrested! Oh, the plot thickens! I'll be needing more soon. :)
Man, Manda needs to learn not to end up in hospital all the time. And her and Michael really need to make up already, haha. But damn Kathy, taking Manda's wallet looking for a credit card? Who does she think she is? I get the feeling she's up to something, but it could just be a red herring.
I totally suspected the candy and I forgot about the sticker for a minute there, but they were nice little twists. Plus I always did suspect Adam. And Manda's dad calling her, whoa.
And Michael being arrested! Oh, the plot thickens! I'll be needing more soon. :)
2/11/2007 c15 murderprotocol
Damn, I am so sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. I read it, left myself a note to review even, and totally forgot to do it. Life got a little crazy there for awhile, haha.
I'm so jealous of Manda right now. Lying in bed beside two hot men. She doesn't realise how incredibly lucky she is! I'd kill for that! It's funny that Damien doesn't even wake up when she jabs him in the stomach. And she ruined her little moment with Michael! I was so hoping something profound would happen. Like Manda would admit she's in love, haha.
Haha, I knew that candy from the diner would come in handy. Poor Manda, that girl needs looking after. Her pride is harming her health! And I was so hoping she'd throw water over Damien.
Scandal. That made me crack up. Small towns are so dirty, honestly. She comes into town with two men and suddenly everyone's all 'Ooh, they're some kinky threesome' or whatever.
Man, I hate that Manda's so self-deprecating. Michael is totally not too good for her. And she gave away her ring! She's nuts!
And so the mystery thickens. And Manda crashes the car because she's so damn hungry. She never learns.
A great update. I'll be looking forward to more.
Damn, I am so sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. I read it, left myself a note to review even, and totally forgot to do it. Life got a little crazy there for awhile, haha.
I'm so jealous of Manda right now. Lying in bed beside two hot men. She doesn't realise how incredibly lucky she is! I'd kill for that! It's funny that Damien doesn't even wake up when she jabs him in the stomach. And she ruined her little moment with Michael! I was so hoping something profound would happen. Like Manda would admit she's in love, haha.
Haha, I knew that candy from the diner would come in handy. Poor Manda, that girl needs looking after. Her pride is harming her health! And I was so hoping she'd throw water over Damien.
Scandal. That made me crack up. Small towns are so dirty, honestly. She comes into town with two men and suddenly everyone's all 'Ooh, they're some kinky threesome' or whatever.
Man, I hate that Manda's so self-deprecating. Michael is totally not too good for her. And she gave away her ring! She's nuts!
And so the mystery thickens. And Manda crashes the car because she's so damn hungry. She never learns.
A great update. I'll be looking forward to more.
12/31/2006 c13 murderprotocol
I just realised I never reviewed this... oops. :)
So, was it Kathy who took Manda's wallet, or someone else... like Jason. I don't trust him. Must be Michael's influence over me, haha. And Manda's bag - sheesh. Wish I had all that sort of cool stuff in my bag.
Adam and Alex - something fishy there. And the candy, I'm beginning to wonder if that has anything to do with the case.
Connor's apartment sound rather swishy, and Damien, that boy may be a sleaze, but he's smooth. And Manda and Michael are both going to end up in NJ! Well, that should be interesting, the two of them both on the hunt for Carol Baumann.
Can't wait for more! :)
I just realised I never reviewed this... oops. :)
So, was it Kathy who took Manda's wallet, or someone else... like Jason. I don't trust him. Must be Michael's influence over me, haha. And Manda's bag - sheesh. Wish I had all that sort of cool stuff in my bag.
Adam and Alex - something fishy there. And the candy, I'm beginning to wonder if that has anything to do with the case.
Connor's apartment sound rather swishy, and Damien, that boy may be a sleaze, but he's smooth. And Manda and Michael are both going to end up in NJ! Well, that should be interesting, the two of them both on the hunt for Carol Baumann.
Can't wait for more! :)
12/19/2006 c12 murderprotocol
Wow, Kathy is such a cow. I feel as though I should suspect her... I really like that Damien's back in the picture. I've probably said that already, but he just makes me laugh. I love that he threatened Michael by saying he'd get Manda. And I love even more that Michael reacted to that! Goes to show he doesn't want to break up with her. It's nice he's going to help her still, although I imagine things will be incredibly awkward. Hopefully they'll be able to sort things out and find Manda's dad. :)
Wow, Kathy is such a cow. I feel as though I should suspect her... I really like that Damien's back in the picture. I've probably said that already, but he just makes me laugh. I love that he threatened Michael by saying he'd get Manda. And I love even more that Michael reacted to that! Goes to show he doesn't want to break up with her. It's nice he's going to help her still, although I imagine things will be incredibly awkward. Hopefully they'll be able to sort things out and find Manda's dad. :)
12/7/2006 c11 murderprotocol
Oh Manda... that girl never learns, does she? I like that we finally got to see some anger in Michael, although I probably would have blown up something crazy if anyone had done that to me. I'm surprised he thinks that she just wanted his money though, and wouldn't let Manda get the chance to ask him about the money from that guy whose name I can't pronounce. :)
I'm certain Michael's not going to be too happy with Damien either. Here's to hoping Michael and Manda can sort their problems out. It's obvious she loves him, if only she'd just admit it. I'll be waiting for more.
(This is Penning Fantasy, btw, just in case you were confused. I changed my name...)
Oh Manda... that girl never learns, does she? I like that we finally got to see some anger in Michael, although I probably would have blown up something crazy if anyone had done that to me. I'm surprised he thinks that she just wanted his money though, and wouldn't let Manda get the chance to ask him about the money from that guy whose name I can't pronounce. :)
I'm certain Michael's not going to be too happy with Damien either. Here's to hoping Michael and Manda can sort their problems out. It's obvious she loves him, if only she'd just admit it. I'll be waiting for more.
(This is Penning Fantasy, btw, just in case you were confused. I changed my name...)
12/3/2006 c10 murderprotocol
Damien does make me laugh so. He's such a male, and yet he switches into serious mode so suddenly with Manda. It'll be interesting to see what she finds out about Michael.
I'm curious about the intruder now. I'm guessing it was someone who was looking for something Alex had on Blake Rider. And Alex, that girl sure knows how to hold a grudge. I'm not sure if her reluctance to be around Michael makes her more suspicious. I wonder what Damien will get out of her...
Awaiting more. :)
Damien does make me laugh so. He's such a male, and yet he switches into serious mode so suddenly with Manda. It'll be interesting to see what she finds out about Michael.
I'm curious about the intruder now. I'm guessing it was someone who was looking for something Alex had on Blake Rider. And Alex, that girl sure knows how to hold a grudge. I'm not sure if her reluctance to be around Michael makes her more suspicious. I wonder what Damien will get out of her...
Awaiting more. :)
11/26/2006 c9 murderprotocol
Hmm. FP seems to be a little out of whack lately. Good thing I happened to be browsing my page, otherwise I would have missed this juicy update.
Adam has reason to what the Riders dead. I'm certain it's NOT him, but it's a nice twist. Heck, I could be wrong. I'm also still curious about Michael and his association to that guy who's name I can't pronounce. :) And calling in Damien? That made me laugh. It'll be interesting to see what he can pull up on Jason. And what Manda's going to do with that gun.
Looking forward to more.
Hmm. FP seems to be a little out of whack lately. Good thing I happened to be browsing my page, otherwise I would have missed this juicy update.
Adam has reason to what the Riders dead. I'm certain it's NOT him, but it's a nice twist. Heck, I could be wrong. I'm also still curious about Michael and his association to that guy who's name I can't pronounce. :) And calling in Damien? That made me laugh. It'll be interesting to see what he can pull up on Jason. And what Manda's going to do with that gun.
Looking forward to more.
11/18/2006 c8 murderprotocol
So, Michael's suspicious about Blake and Jason's suspicious about Michael. Poor Manda. I can't begin to imagine what that girl thinks. Sid sounds like an intriguing, but very cool character. His chat program was definitely appropriately named. :) I love how deep your mysteries become. I still I no clue who or why yet and I'm usually pretty good at picking some things! Looking forward to more.
So, Michael's suspicious about Blake and Jason's suspicious about Michael. Poor Manda. I can't begin to imagine what that girl thinks. Sid sounds like an intriguing, but very cool character. His chat program was definitely appropriately named. :) I love how deep your mysteries become. I still I no clue who or why yet and I'm usually pretty good at picking some things! Looking forward to more.
11/11/2006 c7 murderprotocol
I love Michael when he's all jealous. Must be the Irish fire in him. And he can be so naive sometimes. I'm curious about Adam now... it's probably one of those red herrings to throw me off, though.
I've always wanted a big family. I'd love to be in Manda's position marrying into one. The whole wedding dress fitting scene made me laugh... Manda thinking she had to get naked, Michael perving. And I do love Mrs Mackenzie too. Her comments about Manda's breasts were rather classic.
I seem to learn something new about Michael all the time. And Manda... hm. What is she up to now? Guess I'll find out soon. :)
I love Michael when he's all jealous. Must be the Irish fire in him. And he can be so naive sometimes. I'm curious about Adam now... it's probably one of those red herrings to throw me off, though.
I've always wanted a big family. I'd love to be in Manda's position marrying into one. The whole wedding dress fitting scene made me laugh... Manda thinking she had to get naked, Michael perving. And I do love Mrs Mackenzie too. Her comments about Manda's breasts were rather classic.
I seem to learn something new about Michael all the time. And Manda... hm. What is she up to now? Guess I'll find out soon. :)