for Reflections on a Wasted Life10/6/2006 c1 
41BearHeart
This is a really good read. You have created a special intimacy between the character and the reader. In my opinion, the ending lets the rest down. From "So hear what I tell you", it may be more effective to just allow the reader to make their own judgment. Finish with a question or a statement related to the 'self' of the character.
41BearHeartThis is a really good read. You have created a special intimacy between the character and the reader. In my opinion, the ending lets the rest down. From "So hear what I tell you", it may be more effective to just allow the reader to make their own judgment. Finish with a question or a statement related to the 'self' of the character.