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4/16/2007 c1 Silence the Storm
Great poem. I can totally relate lol. I especially liked the first stanza. I was impressed that you rhymed 'time' with 'sublime' :p. Good choices of words. Keep it up.
10/8/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
oh! I definitly know this feeling. I feel it three times a day..in my Pre-calculus class *shudder* my american gov't class, and my food/nutrition class...lol (and thats more than half my day)

I loved the way you described this feeling. Anyone whos ever had to go to school could definitly relate.

"Dreams are knocking

On my eyelid weights"

I loved those lines...I just like the imagery of them...amazing poem! Loved it! Keep up your great work!

And thank you too for the continuous support with your reviews :D It means a lot! Thank you!

~Britney
10/6/2006 c1 16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
hehe so true. you don't even mean to sometimes, you just slip away...

'dreams are knocking'

i like the image of a dream knocking on a door like 'hello? anybody gonna open this thing?' hehe. keep it up :)

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