
10/6/2006 c1 An-Author-At-Heart
Nice! I liked the organization of the words, the few words on each line makes the flow nice, makes the ideas in this kind of like a random brainstorm, as if someone's actually thinking it. I liked it, the idea of the poem in general is great too.
Nice! I liked the organization of the words, the few words on each line makes the flow nice, makes the ideas in this kind of like a random brainstorm, as if someone's actually thinking it. I liked it, the idea of the poem in general is great too.