for The Real Tragedy3/25/2007 c1 
28my-vision
I like how you play with sentence structure. Unique. Also, good subject/observations. Ha - observations. Pun. Keep writing!
28my-visionI like how you play with sentence structure. Unique. Also, good subject/observations. Ha - observations. Pun. Keep writing!
11/22/2006 c1 44S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G
*gets chills* So, so, so GOOD! Oh, the bitterness is incredible... I just LOVE your work!
44S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G*gets chills* So, so, so GOOD! Oh, the bitterness is incredible... I just LOVE your work!
11/21/2006 c1 Talayeh
Howdy! I got it into my head this morning that I should take a look at my one amazing reviewer. I can't believe I haven't already.
I've read several of your poems, all wonderful, so far, but this one has struck me in particular. Your rhyme scheme is interesting and fresh. The meaning of the poem is very much the latter also.
Continue writing! You're very good with manipulating simple words; A rare talent in my mind.
Talayeh
Howdy! I got it into my head this morning that I should take a look at my one amazing reviewer. I can't believe I haven't already.
I've read several of your poems, all wonderful, so far, but this one has struck me in particular. Your rhyme scheme is interesting and fresh. The meaning of the poem is very much the latter also.
Continue writing! You're very good with manipulating simple words; A rare talent in my mind.
Talayeh
10/10/2006 c1 6Ace Lee Bailey
Hm. The way your writing makes me think love. "All fall downFall down, allDown all fall."
Amazing.
6Ace Lee BaileyHm. The way your writing makes me think love. "All fall downFall down, allDown all fall."
Amazing.
10/8/2006 c1 202Terence the Terrible
Wicked awesome. It's cold, it's straightforward, it's bitter, and it's just the kind of reality I like to read. Marvelous work. A fav for sure.
202Terence the TerribleWicked awesome. It's cold, it's straightforward, it's bitter, and it's just the kind of reality I like to read. Marvelous work. A fav for sure.
10/7/2006 c1 16The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
wow... i love this. its so bitter and ironic and sad... the last three lines own me. keep it up :D
16The Melancholy Cocoa Beanwow... i love this. its so bitter and ironic and sad... the last three lines own me. keep it up :D