for Reflections3/5/2008 c1 
22Amertie
The ending was really disturbing, but it was very effective.
I'm very freaked out right now.
I usually don't like stories like this, but I liked yours. Good work.
I loved your choice of words throughout the story, and I especially liked the description in the following:
"His teeth flashed in the dark like some deranged Cheshire cat."
-Amertie
22AmertieThe ending was really disturbing, but it was very effective.
I'm very freaked out right now.
I usually don't like stories like this, but I liked yours. Good work.
I loved your choice of words throughout the story, and I especially liked the description in the following:
"His teeth flashed in the dark like some deranged Cheshire cat."
-Amertie
12/4/2006 c1 10SJ Raymond
I enjoyed this story, strangely, as deranged as it is. Your writings are a breath of fresh air. I say this because a lot of people who post their stories all have the same thing in common, and you are different. Everything flows so well. Keep up the good work!
10SJ RaymondI enjoyed this story, strangely, as deranged as it is. Your writings are a breath of fresh air. I say this because a lot of people who post their stories all have the same thing in common, and you are different. Everything flows so well. Keep up the good work!