for Collection of Haiku10/8/2006 c1 
16brokendreams21
Both of them are quite beautifully written and it really reminds me of sunrise and of the night, respectively. I really liked that fact that you decided to pair these two together. It's quite fitting. Also, I just love the last line of the first haiku. A great comparison. Great job!
16brokendreams21Both of them are quite beautifully written and it really reminds me of sunrise and of the night, respectively. I really liked that fact that you decided to pair these two together. It's quite fitting. Also, I just love the last line of the first haiku. A great comparison. Great job!