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10/9/2006 c1 14Queerest
Wow. Love the ending especially. You've written this in the fiction section...as in...stories? when it's a poem
10/9/2006 c1 1Hutchy
Remarkable. I haven't read anything like this in a long time. It's a refreshing change of pace from the poetry I'm used to reading. And the execution! Well done. You took a subject matter that has been done dozens of times and made it work. Good job.
10/9/2006 c1 1ThePhantomHairCut
Whoa. Deep. Your method of organizing the paragraphs was interesting. You worked out natural pauses and reactions simply by using spacing. Very clever. Well done.

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