10/11/2006 c2 19Matet
ZOMG! i wanna read more! XD

please please please post soon.

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i love it!

10/9/2006 c1 4Imalefty
ahahahaha, this is such a random sounding story! so fluffy. i really like your characters and the carefree tone. :D

all i would suggest is creating a new paragraph for every new speaker. there were a few times where i thought he was talking but it was actually she.

great story, keep writing!

-Lefty