for A Wizard's Tale10/10/2006 c1 
8ainedamdz
Hey, interesting story you've got here.
Well, overall, this has some good descriptions and an okay pacing. The plot is an interesting one... BUT you have such long paragraphs. Maybe you could break it up into smaller parts to adjust the flow of the story?
Well, that was just a suggestion anyway. It's still entirely up to you. Okay then, I hope to see more of your works in the future! Until next review, update soon!
8ainedamdzHey, interesting story you've got here.
Well, overall, this has some good descriptions and an okay pacing. The plot is an interesting one... BUT you have such long paragraphs. Maybe you could break it up into smaller parts to adjust the flow of the story?
Well, that was just a suggestion anyway. It's still entirely up to you. Okay then, I hope to see more of your works in the future! Until next review, update soon!