
4/25/2009 c5
7smurf-love
haha well i really like it, at first i thought you were going to like say everything thats happens but by chapter 5 i think you got the hang of it.
looking forward to reading more

haha well i really like it, at first i thought you were going to like say everything thats happens but by chapter 5 i think you got the hang of it.
looking forward to reading more
11/26/2008 c5
4Suraya Abd Rahman
Oh wow! I must sat, I really like this. I love your writing style, simple and it's really pleasant for me to read it. Hope to read more soon! (:

Oh wow! I must sat, I really like this. I love your writing style, simple and it's really pleasant for me to read it. Hope to read more soon! (:
9/16/2008 c2
1Nibbsss
AMAZING STORY!
well written, entertaining, nothing that was unnecessary.
perfect.

AMAZING STORY!
well written, entertaining, nothing that was unnecessary.
perfect.
7/9/2008 c5 Dry Pageant
Well...this looks interesting...I'm looking forward to figuring out what will happen. :)
Well...this looks interesting...I'm looking forward to figuring out what will happen. :)
5/10/2008 c5 kimmy
gaga that lady is hilariously horrible. great job on another chapter!
gaga that lady is hilariously horrible. great job on another chapter!
5/4/2008 c5 Kura-sama
Heh. I wonder when she'll run into the guy she saved? How is she going to take not being able to snowboard? She needs practice right?
Waiting for more chappies ^^ Great chapter~
Her mom is so .. I duno, like, living in the clouds and not really on earth. I hope Mark gets something nasty coming to him eventually!
Heh. I wonder when she'll run into the guy she saved? How is she going to take not being able to snowboard? She needs practice right?
Waiting for more chappies ^^ Great chapter~
Her mom is so .. I duno, like, living in the clouds and not really on earth. I hope Mark gets something nasty coming to him eventually!
4/10/2008 c4 Kura-sama
Whoot I can feel a great story in the works~ I like the begining ... I bet that Mark is not good news? I like the twins XD I just really have a weak spot for twins, and these two have really personalities! Hope to read more soon ^^
Whoot I can feel a great story in the works~ I like the begining ... I bet that Mark is not good news? I like the twins XD I just really have a weak spot for twins, and these two have really personalities! Hope to read more soon ^^
1/9/2008 c4 SapphireEyes16
i luv the idea of this story! so you should really keep on writing it, hope you update soon!
i luv the idea of this story! so you should really keep on writing it, hope you update soon!