for A Real Love Story2/29/2012 c1 angkay81
this is good! mind making a sequel of this or a series.. I enjoyed reading your works. keep it up. :)
this is good! mind making a sequel of this or a series.. I enjoyed reading your works. keep it up. :)
1/3/2010 c1 
6letyoursoultakeflight
Aww, love it =] I always like one-shots... until I get to the end and realise how awesome a long version would be... hehe =] Love it!
6letyoursoultakeflightAww, love it =] I always like one-shots... until I get to the end and realise how awesome a long version would be... hehe =] Love it!
5/17/2009 c1 1Cepaea
Aw! This was so sweet, I'm glad he didn't really cheat on her. I loved the quote at the beginning!
1CepaeaAw! This was so sweet, I'm glad he didn't really cheat on her. I loved the quote at the beginning!
5/1/2009 c1 6rentedspace
Aweh. That was /so sweet/. And suddenly I'm reminded that today is my friend's one year anniversary with her boyfriend. Which just makes this seem /even sweeter/. Even though I'm pretty sure if he ever did that to her (here referring to my friend Sarah and her boyfriend Mike) I would... I don't know, I'm not a very violent person, but I'd do something incredibly angry-seeming. Because I would be. Very angry. Anyway. But. I loved that. I'm kind of cooing in my head right now. And... swooning? Whatever. Very nicely written, and heartwarming to read. ^^;
6rentedspaceAweh. That was /so sweet/. And suddenly I'm reminded that today is my friend's one year anniversary with her boyfriend. Which just makes this seem /even sweeter/. Even though I'm pretty sure if he ever did that to her (here referring to my friend Sarah and her boyfriend Mike) I would... I don't know, I'm not a very violent person, but I'd do something incredibly angry-seeming. Because I would be. Very angry. Anyway. But. I loved that. I'm kind of cooing in my head right now. And... swooning? Whatever. Very nicely written, and heartwarming to read. ^^;
4/3/2009 c1 7writing.is.an.addiction
You turned a cliche into a non corny cute story :-)
I liked it, you're a really great writer :-)
7writing.is.an.addictionYou turned a cliche into a non corny cute story :-)
I liked it, you're a really great writer :-)
1/22/2009 c1 monch
cliche. nup said but you write really good. just find new plots.
cliche. nup said but you write really good. just find new plots.
4/16/2008 c1 12elisefey
I love that quote!
Anyway, I like the quiet solemn tone that you use from the very beginning of the story. It really helps me feel Alaina's mood. So much so that by the end of the story I wanted to kiss him and hit him all at once. Nicely done.
12elisefeyI love that quote!
Anyway, I like the quiet solemn tone that you use from the very beginning of the story. It really helps me feel Alaina's mood. So much so that by the end of the story I wanted to kiss him and hit him all at once. Nicely done.
12/31/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Aww, adorable story. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a brilliant day.
Thanks for your reviews of "When an Angel Falls". I really appreciate it.
Happy New Year!
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrAww, adorable story. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a brilliant day.
Thanks for your reviews of "When an Angel Falls". I really appreciate it.
Happy New Year!
~Twilight Starr~
1/22/2007 c1 49Neaera
OMGOODNESS! I ADORE this! Ahh! This was well writen and so incredibly sweet... aw! KEEP IT UP!
49NeaeraOMGOODNESS! I ADORE this! Ahh! This was well writen and so incredibly sweet... aw! KEEP IT UP!
1/15/2007 c1 11Torn and Tattered
this was AMAZING! i can't beleive how incredible this one-shot was! it's probably one of the best i've read. this is going on my favorites list.
you have really in-depth descrptiveness that drags you into the story. the beginning was catchy, and i liked the way you gradually unfolded the plot and the past events. i've seen a problem wit some authors that thy take the time to describe te characters in depth and all... that' just taking up space ad it's just BLAH. i liked how you let yur story descibe them for you. i look forward to reading more of your selections when i get a chance.
TAD
11Torn and Tatteredthis was AMAZING! i can't beleive how incredible this one-shot was! it's probably one of the best i've read. this is going on my favorites list.
you have really in-depth descrptiveness that drags you into the story. the beginning was catchy, and i liked the way you gradually unfolded the plot and the past events. i've seen a problem wit some authors that thy take the time to describe te characters in depth and all... that' just taking up space ad it's just BLAH. i liked how you let yur story descibe them for you. i look forward to reading more of your selections when i get a chance.
TAD