for Eccos11/21/2006 c1 polka dots and addictions
the rhyming in this is just gorgeous, so natural & it works so well as if it were put their by accident! i love the flow to this, and they way you've worded it is wonderful. beautiful work. ~Bex xx
the rhyming in this is just gorgeous, so natural & it works so well as if it were put their by accident! i love the flow to this, and they way you've worded it is wonderful. beautiful work. ~Bex xx
11/9/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Wonderfully written. I love the style here. Great work, I enjoyed this a lot. Keep writing.
Wonderfully written. I love the style here. Great work, I enjoyed this a lot. Keep writing.
11/9/2006 c1 
87Chaos Apple
Wonderful job. I enjoyed this quite a bit.
The entire flow was so centered and so nicely done! And the tone of piece wasn't so happy-go-lucky that I wanted to vomit-which seems to be the case with most love/romance poems. You presented your emotions nicely and in such a way that I could connect with you easily. That's an important skill.
I look forward to reading more.
Alice
87Chaos AppleWonderful job. I enjoyed this quite a bit.
The entire flow was so centered and so nicely done! And the tone of piece wasn't so happy-go-lucky that I wanted to vomit-which seems to be the case with most love/romance poems. You presented your emotions nicely and in such a way that I could connect with you easily. That's an important skill.
I look forward to reading more.
Alice
11/4/2006 c1 463All Alone With Her Thoughts
Excellent job. I like this one a lot!
Thanks for the review.
~Rowan~
463All Alone With Her ThoughtsExcellent job. I like this one a lot!
Thanks for the review.
~Rowan~
10/21/2006 c1 85Reborn As I
"Happiness/Your touch bestowed" - i like the way that sounds. Thanks for the review.
85Reborn As I"Happiness/Your touch bestowed" - i like the way that sounds. Thanks for the review.