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6/5/2010 c1 25Kyllex
I actually really like this. It's an interesting metaphor. And the stanzas are great, in my opinion.

I feel really lame leaving such a short review after you gave me such a good, long, wonderful one - but I don't know what else to say.

It was good, though, and I liked it! (: I can't write poetry worth crap so I love reading it when it's well done. It's something that just blows my mind. Nice job!
10/19/2006 c1 9fj3895y23u8t90ujfasdkui
I like the stanzas. They break up the poem into its little components. Anyway, you know I love this poem! I'm glad that you put this on here. Don't worry, I post a lot of my stuff for Creative Writing too.

Love ya (in a completely platonic way! ;)

-Jess

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