for The Savior Wept10/7/2008 c1 
15Servant of the Lord
wow... this is so good. it's so often we forget that Jesus crys with us when were hurting. of all your stuff that i have read so far i think this is my favorit.
15Servant of the Lordwow... this is so good. it's so often we forget that Jesus crys with us when were hurting. of all your stuff that i have read so far i think this is my favorit.
1/28/2008 c1 1ardency
It was a stunning piece of work. I honestly have no criticism. It doesn't need to be longer or shorter, and you nailed the emotion. I loved the ending. It's great that you put in how Jesus weeps with us and how we aren't alone, although it seems like it.
1ardencyIt was a stunning piece of work. I honestly have no criticism. It doesn't need to be longer or shorter, and you nailed the emotion. I loved the ending. It's great that you put in how Jesus weeps with us and how we aren't alone, although it seems like it.
11/7/2006 c1 Nathan Reimold
Great Job! It is hard to put emotion down on paper. Words are logical and structured. Keep working on that!
Great Job! It is hard to put emotion down on paper. Words are logical and structured. Keep working on that!
10/22/2006 c1 45Wolfgirl1987
At first I was shocked and disappointed that this was so short.. but it really is beautiful. and moving. Jesus feels our pain and grants us comfort in the tears He cries with and for us. Thank you for writing this. May you continue to glorify Him
45Wolfgirl1987At first I was shocked and disappointed that this was so short.. but it really is beautiful. and moving. Jesus feels our pain and grants us comfort in the tears He cries with and for us. Thank you for writing this. May you continue to glorify Him
10/12/2006 c1 19phantom-jedi
A touching little illustration of the love the Savior has for mankind.
No critism to be given here.
phantom_jedi
19phantom-jediA touching little illustration of the love the Savior has for mankind.
No critism to be given here.
phantom_jedi