for Bruised10/26/2006 c3 
3Femilip
She sounds a lot like me in a way...I'm always getting depressed with my parents going into my life and trying to find every single detail about it. Anyways, update soon!
3FemilipShe sounds a lot like me in a way...I'm always getting depressed with my parents going into my life and trying to find every single detail about it. Anyways, update soon!
10/25/2006 c2 5nikkiRA
wow I like it. You give a good description of how tired she is and why she is so, it drew me in, and your grammar is good, which gives you an A+ in my book, even though mine sucks. very powerful! i love it!
5nikkiRAwow I like it. You give a good description of how tired she is and why she is so, it drew me in, and your grammar is good, which gives you an A+ in my book, even though mine sucks. very powerful! i love it!