for Left On The Shelf8/26/2008 c1 
1Vienershmaken
Wow. Just wow. I can't express enough how I love how the last line sums so much up. Makes the rest of the poem seem...unneeded?...I'm jokeing, this poem was amazing. It shall be the first that I harvest in my favourites.
Once more, amazing work. Thank you for haveing talent.
1VienershmakenWow. Just wow. I can't express enough how I love how the last line sums so much up. Makes the rest of the poem seem...unneeded?...I'm jokeing, this poem was amazing. It shall be the first that I harvest in my favourites.
Once more, amazing work. Thank you for haveing talent.
3/12/2008 c1 95XxXKristie MarieXxX
This is so sad but so beautiful... Love the last line. Keep up the great work and may you be happy.
XKristie MarieX
95XxXKristie MarieXxXThis is so sad but so beautiful... Love the last line. Keep up the great work and may you be happy.
XKristie MarieX
1/29/2008 c1 1HappyBunny91
Aw that was really good. I'm goin through a breakup of my own with my first real boyfriend and its not goin real great. This poem really helped!
It was great writing! I'd like to read more of your stuff! Good job!
1HappyBunny91Aw that was really good. I'm goin through a breakup of my own with my first real boyfriend and its not goin real great. This poem really helped!
It was great writing! I'd like to read more of your stuff! Good job!
1/11/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Sweet, really well written, awesome choice of words, really great poem, kkep writing, and i'll keep reading!
~Lurid~
31Lurid BlackSweet, really well written, awesome choice of words, really great poem, kkep writing, and i'll keep reading!
~Lurid~
2/6/2007 c1 4K.Andrews
You know when some poems don't even feel like poems, just a beautifully accurate description? This is it. I hope that comes across as a compliment because it really is. You're truly talented.
4K.AndrewsYou know when some poems don't even feel like poems, just a beautifully accurate description? This is it. I hope that comes across as a compliment because it really is. You're truly talented.
12/18/2006 c1 15LovetheMadness
loved it. absolutely loved it. i usually just skim through longer poems but this one was really good. I actually thought of putting it in my favorites (the first one)...but it was greatt. keep writing.
15LovetheMadnessloved it. absolutely loved it. i usually just skim through longer poems but this one was really good. I actually thought of putting it in my favorites (the first one)...but it was greatt. keep writing.
10/18/2006 c1 123Black and White Dreams
Wow... amazing... This is EXACTLY how I feel right now. My bf broke up with me, and that's how I'd been feeling for almost a month before he did. This is beautiful. I love it. On my fav. stories.
*~Black and White Dreams~*
123Black and White DreamsWow... amazing... This is EXACTLY how I feel right now. My bf broke up with me, and that's how I'd been feeling for almost a month before he did. This is beautiful. I love it. On my fav. stories.
*~Black and White Dreams~*