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6/25/2008 c1 20OutKastPoet
Very serene and touching the short lines and punctuation gives it a nice flow
10/18/2006 c1 59Frore
This poem gives me such an elegant, lilting feel...

Tinged with something else.

Very pretty poem, I hope you keep writing.
10/17/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
hm, seems overly choppy at places, especially the one word lines. overall, a very clear image. well done

keep writing

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