for Trumpets at circuses10/26/2006 c1 Christybell
"Review Throttle: You need to wait at least 30 seconds before submitting another review."
WTF?
Anyway, with that out of the way, this is SUCH A PRETTY POEM! It starts of lovely and sweet and then darkens towards the end... O_o
(I'm using that smilie a lot)
"As a red rose turns black
Please stay pretty forever"
"Review Throttle: You need to wait at least 30 seconds before submitting another review."
WTF?
Anyway, with that out of the way, this is SUCH A PRETTY POEM! It starts of lovely and sweet and then darkens towards the end... O_o
(I'm using that smilie a lot)
"As a red rose turns black
Please stay pretty forever"
10/18/2006 c1 
89rira-chan
wow. very good poem once again. it's simple yet beautiful.
~rira-chan
P.S thank you very much for your comment on my poem. i appreciate it very much. ^_^
89rira-chanwow. very good poem once again. it's simple yet beautiful.
~rira-chan
P.S thank you very much for your comment on my poem. i appreciate it very much. ^_^
10/18/2006 c1 76Cobster
Nicely morbid. The flow of the imagery from light to dark complements the overall message of the poem. Good job with that.
76CobsterNicely morbid. The flow of the imagery from light to dark complements the overall message of the poem. Good job with that.
10/18/2006 c1 1C. M. Kerr
Took me for a roll, this one. You're right, it is short; but it's sweet, too, in a melancholy way (or maybe my mind's making it melancholy for me, haha!). I really liked this, gonna go check out the rest of your portfolio :)
1C. M. KerrTook me for a roll, this one. You're right, it is short; but it's sweet, too, in a melancholy way (or maybe my mind's making it melancholy for me, haha!). I really liked this, gonna go check out the rest of your portfolio :)