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10/26/2006 c1 Christybell
"Review Throttle: You need to wait at least 30 seconds before submitting another review."


Anyway, with that out of the way, this is SUCH A PRETTY POEM! It starts of lovely and sweet and then darkens towards the end... O_o

(I'm using that smilie a lot)

"As a red rose turns black

Please stay pretty forever"
10/20/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has a marvelous sound and flow. Very well written.
10/18/2006 c1 89rira-chan
wow. very good poem once again. it's simple yet beautiful.


P.S thank you very much for your comment on my poem. i appreciate it very much. ^_^
10/18/2006 c1 76Cobster
Nicely morbid. The flow of the imagery from light to dark complements the overall message of the poem. Good job with that.
10/18/2006 c1 1C. M. Kerr
Took me for a roll, this one. You're right, it is short; but it's sweet, too, in a melancholy way (or maybe my mind's making it melancholy for me, haha!). I really liked this, gonna go check out the rest of your portfolio :)

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