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3/2/2008 c1 28Erisah Mae
Beautiful- the voice of your character is wonderfully natural and the scenes described in this are vivid in their deceptive simplicity. The part I loved the best was how the events were described as "natural progression" without hang-ups and dithering that too many romances seem to be full of.

I loved this.
12/5/2006 c1 Weirdly
Oh my god! That was so cute!

Sorry, just needed to get the fangirl squeal out of the way.

I liked the subtle use of dialect; I think that it kind of made the story a little more real. On the other hand, if you'd used much more of it, it would have been far too much. Congratulations - I really liked this. Thanks for writing!
10/18/2006 c1 3kairi990
For a moment I thought you were going to keep it going, because it seems like it could make a good story.

Besides that, It was great! I really enjoyed it..

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