for Laurel3/15/2008 c1 
8Written
that was such a beautiful, sweet story.. wow. inspirational, seriously. I love how realistic you are with your main character and how bitter she becomes.
well done!
8Writtenthat was such a beautiful, sweet story.. wow. inspirational, seriously. I love how realistic you are with your main character and how bitter she becomes.
well done!
12/12/2006 c1 A.A-H.L
YAY! Happy ending! Well, Laurel was really stubborn, getting her hit, and selfish, complaining and being all bitter, but she learned her lesson and I'm happy about that.
Cool story.
YAY! Happy ending! Well, Laurel was really stubborn, getting her hit, and selfish, complaining and being all bitter, but she learned her lesson and I'm happy about that.
Cool story.