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5/9/2007 c1 46antigonelives
Nah... I write poetry by the light of my mobile or also by the light of a nice-smelling blue light-up rubber, lol.

Anyway, beautiful poem. "Subtlety isn't big shadows on the wall" was my favourite line. Oh, and keep writing! :)

3/31/2007 c1 9Guy The Writer
well done! This is one of my favorite poems that I have ever read on frictionpress. keep up the good work
10/26/2006 c1 Christybell
"She is all alone."

Aw! Sweet and sad.

I refuse to look deeper and instead am taking this at face value (i.e. you are lonely, and so must come round lots and lots and save me from my mad family)

And of course its not weird to write poems by the light of your mobile. I read books by the light of my ipod.

We're all mad really.
10/18/2006 c1 89rira-chan
awesome poem. lofty and eerie. loved it.

10/18/2006 c1 59Frore

Certainly sad and with a lilting, vague undertone of abandonment.
10/18/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
I like the atmosphere that this is in. Tranquil in the dark and writing. Lovely concept. Good work.

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