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11/7/2007 c1 8Secret-Speaker
I absolutely LOVE the second set of lines with all the drug references. In the last line of the second paragraph, "no" should be spelled "know".

I think this would make a great song.

I love how you say "and the chorus girls are singing of the calico and lime" It's really great imagery and words that people don't often use together.

I think you should try to publish it to a literary magazine, if you're into that sort of thing.

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