for Silence10/25/2006 c1 
5Pokey831
Wow. Stories like this always get to me, and this one was no exception. It was very well written.
5Pokey831Wow. Stories like this always get to me, and this one was no exception. It was very well written.
10/21/2006 c1 10leighala
this story is very touching and actually expresses the condition that we, as the next generation, have to suffer at. racism is actually a big problem...-sigh-
omg, i just re-read wat i wrote and i was lyk "woah..i sound so mature"...lol
keep on writing
leighala
10leighalathis story is very touching and actually expresses the condition that we, as the next generation, have to suffer at. racism is actually a big problem...-sigh-
omg, i just re-read wat i wrote and i was lyk "woah..i sound so mature"...lol
keep on writing
leighala
10/21/2006 c1 2Bloodflower
You have no idea how touching this is, both content- and style-wise. I do wonder where those five marks more you OUGHT to have gotten for this piece went!
Well done! You've written a piece that creates introspection. If literature is art, and art is supposed to make people look inside themselves, then this - although it's a short exam piece - falls into the category of literature. :)
2BloodflowerYou have no idea how touching this is, both content- and style-wise. I do wonder where those five marks more you OUGHT to have gotten for this piece went!
Well done! You've written a piece that creates introspection. If literature is art, and art is supposed to make people look inside themselves, then this - although it's a short exam piece - falls into the category of literature. :)
10/19/2006 c1 4Angelic Brunette Hermione
That was . . . amazing.
Words can't describe how chillingly scary it was. But you did an excellent job.
:Aplauds:
ABH
4Angelic Brunette HermioneThat was . . . amazing.
Words can't describe how chillingly scary it was. But you did an excellent job.
:Aplauds:
ABH
10/19/2006 c1 28Wings As Eagles
I think this is a good depiction of racism in another country...it's important to realize that it is extreme in other places - that racism in the U.S. is sad but at least it's "under control".
This is a touching essay...good job!
28Wings As EaglesI think this is a good depiction of racism in another country...it's important to realize that it is extreme in other places - that racism in the U.S. is sad but at least it's "under control".
This is a touching essay...good job!