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9/10/2011 c1 LaurLaur26
Your short stories are very good and I would love to see how you would take on the cahllenge of a whole novel. Brlliant!
10/19/2006 c1 17sunday night sky
I love this - very angsty and bitter. I recognise the feeling. These lines are my faves : 'After almost 2 years I’ve realized that it is entirely possible for me to move past you' and 'Why shouldn’t I give you the same respect, or lack there of?'. Something to do with the word phrasing really appeals to me. The format makes it hard to read, though, you could use more paragraphing/ new lines. Also, the last line seems a bit weak in light of the rest of the poem and title. Argh sorry I must be sounding so bitchy, I do really really like the poem! This is just some constructive criticism. Keep writing. :D

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