
1/4/2010 c1 NothingxGoldxCanxStay
This is sweet and simple. It doesn't waste time stretching out the message you try to send. Some spelling errors, but other than that, it's good.
This is sweet and simple. It doesn't waste time stretching out the message you try to send. Some spelling errors, but other than that, it's good.
10/19/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Very well done. I like the emotion in this. The last two lines in this are great. Nice work and keep it up.
Very well done. I like the emotion in this. The last two lines in this are great. Nice work and keep it up.