for Snow6/4/2008 c1 
16Dolvich
Brr...
Again, your description is spot on, making the reader feel the cold.
Sad, and good. I'm impressed.
Well done.
16DolvichBrr...
Again, your description is spot on, making the reader feel the cold.
Sad, and good. I'm impressed.
Well done.
5/30/2008 c1 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
Wow. That was painted a great picture in my mind. I did have to reread it a couple times to fully understand it, but that might just be that I don't read much horror and my mind was probably looking for a pun. I loved all the intense feelings, but I was kinda confused as to where the two sisters were. One was at the gate, the other was inside, I think I get that, but while I was reading I seemed to think that they were both there (just something to thing about). Awesome story though, it literally took my breath away.
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
Wow. That was painted a great picture in my mind. I did have to reread it a couple times to fully understand it, but that might just be that I don't read much horror and my mind was probably looking for a pun. I loved all the intense feelings, but I was kinda confused as to where the two sisters were. One was at the gate, the other was inside, I think I get that, but while I was reading I seemed to think that they were both there (just something to thing about). Awesome story though, it literally took my breath away.
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
11/28/2006 c1 9Otseis Ragnarok
Are you sure you're fifteen? This is AMAZING! I can only say this: Will there be more?
9Otseis RagnarokAre you sure you're fifteen? This is AMAZING! I can only say this: Will there be more?
10/26/2006 c1 35Autumn Reflections
Awesome. Quite scary too...
More?
Thanks for the fav on SKIN too! *hug*
Love this! I'll read your other piece now.
Take Care and keep writing!
Autumn
35Autumn ReflectionsAwesome. Quite scary too...
More?
Thanks for the fav on SKIN too! *hug*
Love this! I'll read your other piece now.
Take Care and keep writing!
Autumn
10/20/2006 c1 criti-sized
This was a very nice piece. I'm not sure if you're going to continue it, or not, but from what I read, it was very nice.
This was a very nice piece. I'm not sure if you're going to continue it, or not, but from what I read, it was very nice.