for Subtle Changes12/24/2007 c21 alicia
this story is so beautiful!
great work! it was so touching at the part where brent was hospitalised! i actually shed "tears of joys" when he woke up!
and i love the ending!(:
this story is so beautiful!
great work! it was so touching at the part where brent was hospitalised! i actually shed "tears of joys" when he woke up!
and i love the ending!(:
12/15/2007 c21 Kae
You've created such a wonderful story and characters. I was tearing up at many parts throughout the story and I especially love the way you portrayed the relationship between Aubrianne and her father. While I didn't warm up to Aubrianne in the beginning, she or rather you won me over with her innocence and purity.
Well I think every review should have a little constructive criticism so here is just a thought I had. I feel that while Brent is a wonderful lovable character it is quite sad that he becomes a 'lesser-character' without Aubrey. Although you might have wanted to do that to show his dedication to her, perhaps it might have been nice for him to be able to stand on his own feet character-wise.
You've created such a wonderful story and characters. I was tearing up at many parts throughout the story and I especially love the way you portrayed the relationship between Aubrianne and her father. While I didn't warm up to Aubrianne in the beginning, she or rather you won me over with her innocence and purity.
Well I think every review should have a little constructive criticism so here is just a thought I had. I feel that while Brent is a wonderful lovable character it is quite sad that he becomes a 'lesser-character' without Aubrey. Although you might have wanted to do that to show his dedication to her, perhaps it might have been nice for him to be able to stand on his own feet character-wise.
11/24/2007 c21 Kolena
Omg. This story is beautiful. I loved it. I was almost in tears quiet a few times. I really loved how you didn't make Aubrianne out to be some regular ditzy air head. She actually had some depth and a really pure innocence about her. I absolutetly loved Brent and how he was so kinda and patient with her even in kindergarden. :P Well, pretty much, I just loved it.
Omg. This story is beautiful. I loved it. I was almost in tears quiet a few times. I really loved how you didn't make Aubrianne out to be some regular ditzy air head. She actually had some depth and a really pure innocence about her. I absolutetly loved Brent and how he was so kinda and patient with her even in kindergarden. :P Well, pretty much, I just loved it.
10/27/2007 c21 Dances-With-Pen
This story is the most touching and endearing story ever. I just love the depth and innocence of Aubrianne, and I'm in love with Brent. They touched my heart. You're a brilliant story teller.
This story is the most touching and endearing story ever. I just love the depth and innocence of Aubrianne, and I'm in love with Brent. They touched my heart. You're a brilliant story teller.
10/9/2007 c21 mmhmm
i love your story! it's so sweet. =D and it made me cry!
great job.
i love your story! it's so sweet. =D and it made me cry!
great job.
10/2/2007 c21 
2Zerene
This was the sweetest story I have ever read!I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
Em-A-Lee
2ZereneThis was the sweetest story I have ever read!I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
Em-A-Lee
9/21/2007 c21 5anacharlie
It is a great story. I'm sorry I didn't review before. I liked Brent right from the begining, but Annie took a little longer. She seems air-headed at first, but once I kept on reading I saw she's exactly the opposite.
You made it easy to read and easy to feel for the characters.
5anacharlieIt is a great story. I'm sorry I didn't review before. I liked Brent right from the begining, but Annie took a little longer. She seems air-headed at first, but once I kept on reading I saw she's exactly the opposite.
You made it easy to read and easy to feel for the characters.
9/4/2007 c21 58E22rin
This story made me cry all the way through it! But I love it so much! It's a fantastic story. The characters are great, the plot is well developed, and I just love cliche stories! Well that is when they're not the extremely annoying ones. ;) But amazing job, this is definately one of my favourite stories. :)
~*Erin*~
58E22rinThis story made me cry all the way through it! But I love it so much! It's a fantastic story. The characters are great, the plot is well developed, and I just love cliche stories! Well that is when they're not the extremely annoying ones. ;) But amazing job, this is definately one of my favourite stories. :)
~*Erin*~
8/28/2007 c21 lexicon37893q09
This story is one of the most beautifully written and executed stories I have ever read on fictionpress (and I have read more than my share :D ) . It was touching and you stayed true to your characters while slowly developing them more and more and working it all in with your plot. Great job!
This story is one of the most beautifully written and executed stories I have ever read on fictionpress (and I have read more than my share :D ) . It was touching and you stayed true to your characters while slowly developing them more and more and working it all in with your plot. Great job!
8/22/2007 c21 bridgette261
Oh my goodness. This has got to be one of the BEST stories I've ever read in my entire life. It had me crying by chapter 3 and...wow. Kudos on the job well done! I could definitely see this being turned into a movie. Thanks for this beautiful piece of work. :)
-Katherine
Oh my goodness. This has got to be one of the BEST stories I've ever read in my entire life. It had me crying by chapter 3 and...wow. Kudos on the job well done! I could definitely see this being turned into a movie. Thanks for this beautiful piece of work. :)
-Katherine
8/22/2007 c1 bridgette261
I have to tell you that I usually don't review on the first chapter when I'm binge-speed-reading (when I read a finished story all in one sitting), but I just had to review. This first chapter...IT WAS PERFECT! I'm actually really excited for the rest of the story :)
-Katherine
I have to tell you that I usually don't review on the first chapter when I'm binge-speed-reading (when I read a finished story all in one sitting), but I just had to review. This first chapter...IT WAS PERFECT! I'm actually really excited for the rest of the story :)
-Katherine
8/16/2007 c21 Sydney
There's nothing I love more than a beautiful story with endearing characters. Bravo on an amazing job well done!
There's nothing I love more than a beautiful story with endearing characters. Bravo on an amazing job well done!
8/15/2007 c21 7Faithfully Yours
Aw! That was the sweetest story I've ever read. Seriously, I almost cried. That was great.
7Faithfully YoursAw! That was the sweetest story I've ever read. Seriously, I almost cried. That was great.
8/13/2007 c1 1Coffee blews
I knew this was a special story the moment I first read it...I couldn't stop!
I love both of the characters very much - their sweet love and their dedication to each other.
- CB.
1Coffee blewsI knew this was a special story the moment I first read it...I couldn't stop!
I love both of the characters very much - their sweet love and their dedication to each other.
- CB.