for Subtle Changes8/12/2007 c13 
2abc123 chewy
so... the last part of this chapter was completely cheesy...
but i loved it anyways...
=]
2abc123 chewyso... the last part of this chapter was completely cheesy...
but i loved it anyways...
=]
8/12/2007 c9 abc123 chewy
so...
i realized...
that i love your story...
its not totally cliche and i've never actually read anything about the 'ditzy cheerleader'
yes... its amazing
so...
i realized...
that i love your story...
its not totally cliche and i've never actually read anything about the 'ditzy cheerleader'
yes... its amazing
8/11/2007 c21 Delayed Flight
Wow, I'm basically speechless, I'm just going to say that I loved it so much!
Wow, I'm basically speechless, I'm just going to say that I loved it so much!
8/9/2007 c21 3AJS
Aw this is a REALLY cute story! I love the relationship between Aubrianne and Brent, and I think it's so original how you've turned this "dumb blonde" girl into such a sweet person with a real personality and character that's not just completely annoying. I love how their relationship is so... dependent. You really show how both Brent and Aubrianne are soo different but at the same time, they work completely well together and are compatible in so many ways. I think a lot of stories try their best to get at that, but stop halfway and aren't really able to show it like you do. I also like how even when the characters are themselves with completely different personalities, it doesn't all turn out to be sort of one-sided with just Aubrianne doing the talking and keeping the relationship alive while Brent just acts like his indifferent self... I think it's interesting how you've managed to really make it so that both of them are needed for the relationship to work and it's like... I don't know, but I love it a lot :)
This story is sososososo sweet :) I haven't read any stories on fp in a while so it was also definitely a good read to get back into the mood of things. Keep up the good work and keep on writing! You're really good at creating meaningful relationships between the characters :)
- Alyssa
3AJSAw this is a REALLY cute story! I love the relationship between Aubrianne and Brent, and I think it's so original how you've turned this "dumb blonde" girl into such a sweet person with a real personality and character that's not just completely annoying. I love how their relationship is so... dependent. You really show how both Brent and Aubrianne are soo different but at the same time, they work completely well together and are compatible in so many ways. I think a lot of stories try their best to get at that, but stop halfway and aren't really able to show it like you do. I also like how even when the characters are themselves with completely different personalities, it doesn't all turn out to be sort of one-sided with just Aubrianne doing the talking and keeping the relationship alive while Brent just acts like his indifferent self... I think it's interesting how you've managed to really make it so that both of them are needed for the relationship to work and it's like... I don't know, but I love it a lot :)
This story is sososososo sweet :) I haven't read any stories on fp in a while so it was also definitely a good read to get back into the mood of things. Keep up the good work and keep on writing! You're really good at creating meaningful relationships between the characters :)
- Alyssa
8/9/2007 c21 1eliza-smiles
...AMAZING... that was wonderful and brilliantly written... i teared up a few times during this story... there friendship and everything was so pure and beautiful.. great work... i hope you have written more for everyone to plunge into... cheers, eliza
1eliza-smiles...AMAZING... that was wonderful and brilliantly written... i teared up a few times during this story... there friendship and everything was so pure and beautiful.. great work... i hope you have written more for everyone to plunge into... cheers, eliza
8/8/2007 c21 19jekodama
I actually cried when I read the last reminiscence of their childhood. This was an amazing story, congratulations for writing it. And I'm definitely adding you to MySpace friends! XD
19jekodamaI actually cried when I read the last reminiscence of their childhood. This was an amazing story, congratulations for writing it. And I'm definitely adding you to MySpace friends! XD
8/8/2007 c20 jekodama
I take it back! I don't hate you! In fact, I declare you my best friend! This chapter was ADORABLE!
I take it back! I don't hate you! In fact, I declare you my best friend! This chapter was ADORABLE!
8/8/2007 c17 jekodama
I.
Hate.
You.
For hurting Brent.
You better fix it and give them a happy ending!
I.
Hate.
You.
For hurting Brent.
You better fix it and give them a happy ending!
8/8/2007 c15 jekodama
“Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking. It is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails.”
There is no better definition.
“Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking. It is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails.”
There is no better definition.
8/8/2007 c5 jekodama
Oh... he said "I love you"... That was... beautiful...
This chapter actually made me cry. I have issues with dead and cancer, so, yeah... And I totally understand why you love Brent, he's absolutely adorable.
Oh... he said "I love you"... That was... beautiful...
This chapter actually made me cry. I have issues with dead and cancer, so, yeah... And I totally understand why you love Brent, he's absolutely adorable.
8/7/2007 c21 65sugarrose12
AW, oh my goodness I am crying. That was so adorable. I wish I had a guy like that. It's all so perfect. The only thing I can think of though is that it'd be nice to mention the bracelet again, like maybe Aubrianne could wear it to her wedding. I don't know. Just an idea. I loved it. FAVORITES!
65sugarrose12AW, oh my goodness I am crying. That was so adorable. I wish I had a guy like that. It's all so perfect. The only thing I can think of though is that it'd be nice to mention the bracelet again, like maybe Aubrianne could wear it to her wedding. I don't know. Just an idea. I loved it. FAVORITES!
8/7/2007 c3 19jekodama
So far, I'm loving it. I think I saw a "then" that should be a "than" around, but when I reread the chapter I couldn't find it. Theirs is a unique relationship, so beautiful, so selfless.
19jekodamaSo far, I'm loving it. I think I saw a "then" that should be a "than" around, but when I reread the chapter I couldn't find it. Theirs is a unique relationship, so beautiful, so selfless.
8/7/2007 c2 jekodama
Oh, my God, I was going to cry reading the flashback. That was so utterly sweet, yet sad at the same time.
Oh, my God, I was going to cry reading the flashback. That was so utterly sweet, yet sad at the same time.