for Subtle Changes4/9/2007 c19 
101Shadow of the Black Wolf
oh my. Time to summon his courage and get it over with. Can't wait to see what happens. Waiting..
101Shadow of the Black Wolfoh my. Time to summon his courage and get it over with. Can't wait to see what happens. Waiting..
4/9/2007 c19 rainey
I'm just happy to see Brent alive and talking.
Tell her!
I'm just happy to see Brent alive and talking.
Tell her!
4/9/2007 c19 27why can't I just be tall
this is such a beautiful story. you have portrayed love so well and so beautifully it's almost painful to read it's so beautiful like when you look at someone you love and feel so full of love for that person that your full almost to the point of breaking but you never do break. it's the most wonderfull feeling, it's life all in one feeling all at one time and you have that feeling on paper in this story.
27why can't I just be tallthis is such a beautiful story. you have portrayed love so well and so beautifully it's almost painful to read it's so beautiful like when you look at someone you love and feel so full of love for that person that your full almost to the point of breaking but you never do break. it's the most wonderfull feeling, it's life all in one feeling all at one time and you have that feeling on paper in this story.
4/9/2007 c19 1Gwyn Baranof
Damn, what a horrible way to end this chapter. You better update soon.
I must say that I was quite surprised at Aubrianne's reaction, but now that it happened it fits, in an odd sort of way.
Is there a particular reason why you used "Aubrianne" in the last line?
1Gwyn BaranofDamn, what a horrible way to end this chapter. You better update soon.
I must say that I was quite surprised at Aubrianne's reaction, but now that it happened it fits, in an odd sort of way.
Is there a particular reason why you used "Aubrianne" in the last line?
4/9/2007 c19 jade-is-a-star
holy hell!
omg. he's going to tell her?
holy hell!
omg. he's going to tell her?
4/8/2007 c19 4the rocket apple
So glad about Brent! Good chapter, still loving the story. Aubrianne seems so different, way more worldly wise and mature, and it's really sad. I don't know if you remember, but when I first started this story I told you at first I wasn't sure if she would annoy me, because she was so innocent and maybe stupid, but now-dang! Poor kid.
Keep it up!
4the rocket appleSo glad about Brent! Good chapter, still loving the story. Aubrianne seems so different, way more worldly wise and mature, and it's really sad. I don't know if you remember, but when I first started this story I told you at first I wasn't sure if she would annoy me, because she was so innocent and maybe stupid, but now-dang! Poor kid.
Keep it up!
4/8/2007 c19 5MystryBright
Ah! Cliffhangers! *grinds teeth in frustration*
But great storytelling going on! You never have a dull chapter. I love it! :)
Update soon, please!
5MystryBrightAh! Cliffhangers! *grinds teeth in frustration*
But great storytelling going on! You never have a dull chapter. I love it! :)
Update soon, please!
4/8/2007 c19 3The Ferrett
SCORE! This is great fabulous fun. YAY! (Oh and you said at the beginning so hit either Psycho or Jack)
3The FerrettSCORE! This is great fabulous fun. YAY! (Oh and you said at the beginning so hit either Psycho or Jack)
4/8/2007 c19 Whisper
Hey i like your story, its fresh and it makes me want to keep reading you know? Keep on doing it because i think it could be in a book, i really do and trust me im freakishly picky about stories but yours is awesome, so do it or else lol no jk.
Hey i like your story, its fresh and it makes me want to keep reading you know? Keep on doing it because i think it could be in a book, i really do and trust me im freakishly picky about stories but yours is awesome, so do it or else lol no jk.
4/8/2007 c19 Rachael1011
OMGOSH! ALWAYS LEAVING ME IN SUSPENSE. HA IVE BEEN READING YOUR STORY FOR A WHILE NOW AND I ALWAYS LOOK TO SEE WHEN YOU UPDATE ALMOST EVERYDAY AND TONIGHT I GOT LUCKY! YOU ARE AN EXTREMELY TALENTED WRITER. THIS STORY IS BY FAR THE BEST IVE EVER READ! AND YOU BETTER BELIEVE ILL BE READING YOUR NEW STORY. I DO HOPE YOU WRITE A SEQUEL THOUGH TO THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS WHAT I LOOK FORWARD TO READING EVERYTIME I GET ONLINE, NEXT TO MYSPACE LOL. BUT IT WAS JUST AN AWESOME CHAPTER! THANKS TO WRITERS LIKE YOU~
OMGOSH! ALWAYS LEAVING ME IN SUSPENSE. HA IVE BEEN READING YOUR STORY FOR A WHILE NOW AND I ALWAYS LOOK TO SEE WHEN YOU UPDATE ALMOST EVERYDAY AND TONIGHT I GOT LUCKY! YOU ARE AN EXTREMELY TALENTED WRITER. THIS STORY IS BY FAR THE BEST IVE EVER READ! AND YOU BETTER BELIEVE ILL BE READING YOUR NEW STORY. I DO HOPE YOU WRITE A SEQUEL THOUGH TO THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS WHAT I LOOK FORWARD TO READING EVERYTIME I GET ONLINE, NEXT TO MYSPACE LOL. BUT IT WAS JUST AN AWESOME CHAPTER! THANKS TO WRITERS LIKE YOU~
4/8/2007 c19 306Ashelin
I'm having this odd feeling that I want to kill you and then bring you back to life at the same time. That was wonderful, and it is amazing how Aubrianne changed so much, but really was the same too. But how could you leave it at that? I really hope you update soon. I'm in love with this story. That is why I'm going to check out your other one and see what it is about. :D Thanks for the update. So sad it is getting to the end :[
306AshelinI'm having this odd feeling that I want to kill you and then bring you back to life at the same time. That was wonderful, and it is amazing how Aubrianne changed so much, but really was the same too. But how could you leave it at that? I really hope you update soon. I'm in love with this story. That is why I'm going to check out your other one and see what it is about. :D Thanks for the update. So sad it is getting to the end :[
4/8/2007 c19 4channingcaughtfire
Aww, this is such a cute (but sad) story! I wish I had that sort of love!
4channingcaughtfireAww, this is such a cute (but sad) story! I wish I had that sort of love!
4/8/2007 c19 bitterdeath
I love this story and it would be amazing if you made a sequel for it, i can't wait for the next chapter! I'll check out your other story its porbably just as good!
I love this story and it would be amazing if you made a sequel for it, i can't wait for the next chapter! I'll check out your other story its porbably just as good!
4/8/2007 c19 sleepiedreamer
LOL his friends are funny... so junior wins the bet again? by cheating hahas... i cant believe you cut it off there... but cant wait to read the next chapter... and yeah sucks that the story is ending soon... i really loved it! and write a sequel if you can! xD
LOL his friends are funny... so junior wins the bet again? by cheating hahas... i cant believe you cut it off there... but cant wait to read the next chapter... and yeah sucks that the story is ending soon... i really loved it! and write a sequel if you can! xD