for Subtle Changes2/22/2012 c21 ColorfulWorldNB
Wow! This is such a great story! I'm so glad I found it! Seriously an awesome story! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! :D
Wow! This is such a great story! I'm so glad I found it! Seriously an awesome story! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! :D
1/29/2012 c20 
1Spiked Angel
That was THE sweetest story I have ever read. Thank you for putting it in the world. Seriously. This was amazing. Their relationship was just right and they completed each other in ways way deeper than most romances. At the beginning I thought I would get pissed off when the protagonist wasn't the brightest, after all, everyone loves a smart girl and witty banter. But her innocence and goodwill was so refreshing and perfect for Brent that I loved her. This was really amazing, thank you.
1Spiked AngelThat was THE sweetest story I have ever read. Thank you for putting it in the world. Seriously. This was amazing. Their relationship was just right and they completed each other in ways way deeper than most romances. At the beginning I thought I would get pissed off when the protagonist wasn't the brightest, after all, everyone loves a smart girl and witty banter. But her innocence and goodwill was so refreshing and perfect for Brent that I loved her. This was really amazing, thank you.
12/18/2011 c21 5christinaxxyo
This was absolutely adorable and you ended it perfectly! Amazing job :)
5christinaxxyoThis was absolutely adorable and you ended it perfectly! Amazing job :)
12/13/2011 c1 christinaxxyo
The way you started this was adorable! I can't wait to read more about Brent and Aubrianne :)
The way you started this was adorable! I can't wait to read more about Brent and Aubrianne :)
12/1/2011 c21 melissaasdfghjkl
Good Lord. You have no idea how many times I've cried while reading ths. Such a beautiful, he
art warming story. I absolutely loved it. Amazing job. :')
Good Lord. You have no idea how many times I've cried while reading ths. Such a beautiful, he
art warming story. I absolutely loved it. Amazing job. :')
10/13/2011 c21 ForgottenHope
That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read! I laughed out loud, I aw-ed, I cried miserably. The characters were very well developed; very relatable and real. Also, the progression of the story was nicely done. It wasn't too fast and it didn't drag on for too long. I greatly appreciated your use of flashbacks. They flowed so well with the story and really pulled it all together. Those flashbacks were an essential part of, not only the plot, but also the construction of the story itself. Without them, it would be incomplete. Your way of wrapping everything up with a repeated flashback is something that many writers were shy away from doing, but it worked so brilliantly here. Very well done. And the plot itself was beyond words. I loved every moment of it! The relationship between Aubrianne and Brent was admirable, and even enviable. I absolutely adore them. Their care and love for each other goes beyond words, as Brent so clearly explained in one of the chapters. You did a phenomenal job of showing the readers what was happening, rather than telling them. That's a great quality in any writer. I will definitely be checking out your other stories and hope that you will continue writing. Best of luck!
That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read! I laughed out loud, I aw-ed, I cried miserably. The characters were very well developed; very relatable and real. Also, the progression of the story was nicely done. It wasn't too fast and it didn't drag on for too long. I greatly appreciated your use of flashbacks. They flowed so well with the story and really pulled it all together. Those flashbacks were an essential part of, not only the plot, but also the construction of the story itself. Without them, it would be incomplete. Your way of wrapping everything up with a repeated flashback is something that many writers were shy away from doing, but it worked so brilliantly here. Very well done. And the plot itself was beyond words. I loved every moment of it! The relationship between Aubrianne and Brent was admirable, and even enviable. I absolutely adore them. Their care and love for each other goes beyond words, as Brent so clearly explained in one of the chapters. You did a phenomenal job of showing the readers what was happening, rather than telling them. That's a great quality in any writer. I will definitely be checking out your other stories and hope that you will continue writing. Best of luck!
10/12/2011 c1 ForgottenHope
So I don't normally review a story until the end, especially if it's already complete, but I definitely have to make an exception here. That has got to be the cutest, sweetest, most adorable thing in the world! I loved how you started out with the flashback, brought it to high school, then concluded with the beginnings again. I absolutely adored this chapter! First time I've stopped reading just to review, but this is without a doubt worth it! I can't wait to see what's in store for these two!
So I don't normally review a story until the end, especially if it's already complete, but I definitely have to make an exception here. That has got to be the cutest, sweetest, most adorable thing in the world! I loved how you started out with the flashback, brought it to high school, then concluded with the beginnings again. I absolutely adored this chapter! First time I've stopped reading just to review, but this is without a doubt worth it! I can't wait to see what's in store for these two!
9/14/2011 c1 3AJS
Goodness, I knew this story sounded so familiar and I kept getting deja vus throughout the story. Anyway I guess I ended up reading this again. Cute story, of course. I can't really remember many other details that I wanted to comment on since I finished re-reading this story a few days ago. I apologize for not writing this review sooner since I'm sure it would have been a lot more constructive and helpful to your actual writing than my review 4 years ago was. Wow, I can't believe it's already been that long...
Anyway I see you haven't had much activity on fictionpress lately. I hope that'll change and you'll come back and continue writing.
Best of luck,
Alyssa
3AJSGoodness, I knew this story sounded so familiar and I kept getting deja vus throughout the story. Anyway I guess I ended up reading this again. Cute story, of course. I can't really remember many other details that I wanted to comment on since I finished re-reading this story a few days ago. I apologize for not writing this review sooner since I'm sure it would have been a lot more constructive and helpful to your actual writing than my review 4 years ago was. Wow, I can't believe it's already been that long...
Anyway I see you haven't had much activity on fictionpress lately. I hope that'll change and you'll come back and continue writing.
Best of luck,
Alyssa
8/21/2011 c21 2Twistedin2Delusions
I love your work. I cried and laughed and it was just breathtaking. I knew I would like it after reading the first few sentences. GREAT JOB!
2Twistedin2DelusionsI love your work. I cried and laughed and it was just breathtaking. I knew I would like it after reading the first few sentences. GREAT JOB!
8/14/2011 c21 Niva
GREAT STORY! :)
GREAT STORY! :)
7/19/2011 c21 2fairydustillusion
this is just the cutest story i've ever read. this is actually my third time re-reading it, and it's just as cute the third time around... their relationship/friendship is just so unbearably sweet! that's the purest kind of love :) i loved it. loved it. loved it.
2fairydustillusionthis is just the cutest story i've ever read. this is actually my third time re-reading it, and it's just as cute the third time around... their relationship/friendship is just so unbearably sweet! that's the purest kind of love :) i loved it. loved it. loved it.
7/12/2011 c3 5Disney Is Hardcore
Oh my gosh, those two are the cutest thing in the world! I had a headache, but I forgot about it while reading this...man, I feel like a fangirl, I'll try and keep it down..
At first I thought she was deaf, you know from the first page, because he said something but she was trying to guess what to do?
And her obsession with the stars as well, that's lovely :)
aaaaah. I would try and put in some constructive criticism- because normally I can think of something- but I didn't notice anything and I'm trying really hard not to gush :)
5Disney Is HardcoreOh my gosh, those two are the cutest thing in the world! I had a headache, but I forgot about it while reading this...man, I feel like a fangirl, I'll try and keep it down..
At first I thought she was deaf, you know from the first page, because he said something but she was trying to guess what to do?
And her obsession with the stars as well, that's lovely :)
aaaaah. I would try and put in some constructive criticism- because normally I can think of something- but I didn't notice anything and I'm trying really hard not to gush :)