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10/2/2010 c21 SometimesG
the wedding is the perfect ending... i love it!
10/2/2010 c9 SometimesG
your story is really sweet... i love the family interactions and as always the past childhold years of Brent and Aubrianne. the one that struck me is the bday celebration...to make new memories together.
10/2/2010 c5 SometimesG
this story is so cute and sweet with all the childhood memories...
10/1/2010 c21 Aradia Cloud
This is going in my top ten stories of all of the 250+ stories that I've read on fictionpress. This right here? Publishing material.

Kudos

$*Aradia Cloud*$

P.S. This story was AWESOME.
10/1/2010 c20 Aradia Cloud
Jesus Christ, man. This story is touching my heart.
10/1/2010 c18 Aradia Cloud
I am in tears right now.
10/1/2010 c17 Aradia Cloud
Oh my god. What the hell happened? BRENT! OH GOD!
10/1/2010 c16 Aradia Cloud
Sumthin bad is going to happen. I just know it.
9/30/2010 c13 Aradia Cloud
He's so in love with her. It's smacking them both all up int he face and they can't even see it.
9/30/2010 c11 Aradia Cloud
Muddoe. She left her kid to have more kids. I would have been SO pissed.
9/30/2010 c10 Aradia Cloud
NO Brent! Don't leave her, you bloody ijut.
9/30/2010 c9 Aradia Cloud
Ah... my throat was tight at the ending there. Made me get all teary eyed.
9/30/2010 c4 Aradia Cloud
He's gonna die, isn't he?
9/30/2010 c3 Aradia Cloud
That last scene was so cute. I was smiling through the whole thing.
9/26/2010 c21 1tsukiro
there are no word to describe your story. the best i can do is say: It was beautiful.

I cried so much at times that I had to stop reading to be able to see the word.

I liked Aubrianne because, even though she had trouble understanding certain things, she wasn't outright stupid.

Also the flashbacks seemed to fit in the story. In other stories they annoy me.

God, i loved your story!
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