for Subtle Changes12/30/2009 c21 appletone
Such. A. Good. Story. I completely fell in love with the characters. Gah why did the story have to end?
Such. A. Good. Story. I completely fell in love with the characters. Gah why did the story have to end?
12/20/2009 c6 
1Jinxed Rogue
This was a very original style to write the best friend to boyfriend story in. You interweave their past well with their present a lot. Too often other writers write that characters have known each other their whole lives, then the whole story feels like they're meeting for the first time. This is not the case with yours.
The characters feel like they genuinely started as friends and worked their way towards love. Good job!
1Jinxed RogueThis was a very original style to write the best friend to boyfriend story in. You interweave their past well with their present a lot. Too often other writers write that characters have known each other their whole lives, then the whole story feels like they're meeting for the first time. This is not the case with yours.
The characters feel like they genuinely started as friends and worked their way towards love. Good job!
12/14/2009 c21 14Beautiful Destination
This story is gorgeous. Even though it has the classic love between friends plot, it is definitely not cliche by any means. The relationship between Brent and Aubrianne is amazing and very well portrayed. The love between them is simple, yet strong and everlasting. I love it! I really wish I had a Brent in my life :)
14Beautiful DestinationThis story is gorgeous. Even though it has the classic love between friends plot, it is definitely not cliche by any means. The relationship between Brent and Aubrianne is amazing and very well portrayed. The love between them is simple, yet strong and everlasting. I love it! I really wish I had a Brent in my life :)
11/23/2009 c5 Country Princess
I usually don't review a complete story in the middle of it, but I'm going to bed for the night. It's not that I don't want to read your story; I just have school tomorrow, and I need some sleep. I'll probably think about your story during all of my classes tomorrow until I get to read some more of it. Wow, you're story is really amazing. You're truly a talented author. I love all the cute romantic stuff. The whole dramatic love proclamation? To me, it doesn't mean too much. . . It's just dramatics. Now, for the little things that mean so much, like Brent telling her he'd save her a star, or telling her he loved her, even though they both knew he did love her, but he just didn't like to say those words? That means so much more. You have to show somebody you love them.
Now, if I go on to read this story and their some dramatic love proclamation? It won't bother me because if whoever does it actually does it, I already know they love each other because they've shown it.
You're story has the best mixture of cutesy fluff and has an actual meaning to it. It takes a whole new meaning on the "best friends forever" cliche, even though your story is the farthest thing from a cliche. I totally bet you could get this published. I wish I could write like you. Now, I seriously have to go to bed, and I'll continue this wonderful story tomorrow (maybe even in my dreams). This is the end of the longest review I've ever left anybody.
Tootles
XOXO
I usually don't review a complete story in the middle of it, but I'm going to bed for the night. It's not that I don't want to read your story; I just have school tomorrow, and I need some sleep. I'll probably think about your story during all of my classes tomorrow until I get to read some more of it. Wow, you're story is really amazing. You're truly a talented author. I love all the cute romantic stuff. The whole dramatic love proclamation? To me, it doesn't mean too much. . . It's just dramatics. Now, for the little things that mean so much, like Brent telling her he'd save her a star, or telling her he loved her, even though they both knew he did love her, but he just didn't like to say those words? That means so much more. You have to show somebody you love them.
Now, if I go on to read this story and their some dramatic love proclamation? It won't bother me because if whoever does it actually does it, I already know they love each other because they've shown it.
You're story has the best mixture of cutesy fluff and has an actual meaning to it. It takes a whole new meaning on the "best friends forever" cliche, even though your story is the farthest thing from a cliche. I totally bet you could get this published. I wish I could write like you. Now, I seriously have to go to bed, and I'll continue this wonderful story tomorrow (maybe even in my dreams). This is the end of the longest review I've ever left anybody.
Tootles
XOXO
10/19/2009 c21 4Green Eyed Brunette
for the duration of this story, i cried a lot. i bawled my little eyes out, and i absolutely adored this. no lies. handsdown, pretty damn amazing.
4Green Eyed Brunettefor the duration of this story, i cried a lot. i bawled my little eyes out, and i absolutely adored this. no lies. handsdown, pretty damn amazing.
10/3/2009 c21 1decadebydecade
Oh, dear. That was perfect. I love how everything worked. The story flowed wonderfully, and Brent and Annie just make me really happy.
1decadebydecadeOh, dear. That was perfect. I love how everything worked. The story flowed wonderfully, and Brent and Annie just make me really happy.
9/4/2009 c21 1failwithpride
aww...i love this story! its sso cute!
i love the way t was written.
xoxoxfailwithpride
1failwithprideaww...i love this story! its sso cute!
i love the way t was written.
xoxoxfailwithpride
8/23/2009 c21 Janvier
Wow. That story was one of the most sweetest of Romantic stories I have ever read. In all my years of reading stories on fiction press, this one has never ceased to AMAZE me! Its all inspiring, its everything a good romance story should be. I have never come across anything like it. The love between Annie and Brentie is almost tangible. It seems so real, makes you wonder if love like this exists in the real world. If you ever do, write a story similar to this one, you have to publish it. You are a great author, thanks for indulging me with a wonderful piece of your work. It's been great!
Wow. That story was one of the most sweetest of Romantic stories I have ever read. In all my years of reading stories on fiction press, this one has never ceased to AMAZE me! Its all inspiring, its everything a good romance story should be. I have never come across anything like it. The love between Annie and Brentie is almost tangible. It seems so real, makes you wonder if love like this exists in the real world. If you ever do, write a story similar to this one, you have to publish it. You are a great author, thanks for indulging me with a wonderful piece of your work. It's been great!
7/2/2009 c21 5heartshockey
I loved the recap at the end. Brent is a great character, and so is Aubrianne. You have a really great writing style. I enjoyed reading Subtle Changes. Keep writing. I hope to read more from you.
5heartshockeyI loved the recap at the end. Brent is a great character, and so is Aubrianne. You have a really great writing style. I enjoyed reading Subtle Changes. Keep writing. I hope to read more from you.
7/1/2009 c21 Locker 401
The recap of the end was the perfect finishing touvh. Your writing was a little shaky and redundant sometimes, but I found myself absorbed in your characters- they're so believeable!
Thanks!
Locker 401
The recap of the end was the perfect finishing touvh. Your writing was a little shaky and redundant sometimes, but I found myself absorbed in your characters- they're so believeable!
Thanks!
Locker 401
6/26/2009 c21 Erica71167
Absolutely wonderful! I loved it! I love Brent and Annie! You are a great writer!
Absolutely wonderful! I loved it! I love Brent and Annie! You are a great writer!
6/24/2009 c13 3
Why does everyone you discribe in this have bright blue eye's and some shade of blonde haire? Except for Isabell and Brent, of course. :P
just thought I'd ask. Somebody could have had black hair and green eye's or brown hair and hazel eye's, just for a change.
So far I think everyone except Isabell has blue eye's.
Sorry, I just wanted to point that out. Loved the story.
x
Why does everyone you discribe in this have bright blue eye's and some shade of blonde haire? Except for Isabell and Brent, of course. :P
just thought I'd ask. Somebody could have had black hair and green eye's or brown hair and hazel eye's, just for a change.
So far I think everyone except Isabell has blue eye's.
Sorry, I just wanted to point that out. Loved the story.
x
6/23/2009 c21 Pioneer87
*smiles*
Cute, very cute. I'm not gonna lie, I was gaping at the screen for a couple seconds when I realized that it was *Brent* in a coma. Talk about unexpected. This is one of the most original fanfics I've come across in a while. The fact that she wasn't the perfect or ideal woman made this story even better.
I'll check out some more of your works later today. :)
*adds to favorites*
*smiles*
Cute, very cute. I'm not gonna lie, I was gaping at the screen for a couple seconds when I realized that it was *Brent* in a coma. Talk about unexpected. This is one of the most original fanfics I've come across in a while. The fact that she wasn't the perfect or ideal woman made this story even better.
I'll check out some more of your works later today. :)
*adds to favorites*