for Mental Suicide1/16/2008 c1 
3BlueHarpy
Well I have read this one before but I must say this is one of your better poems Jess. Maybe it's because the emotions behind it are true, I find it funny though that this poem is no longer true. You got to have your friends and him ; they can't hangout together often but you got to keep both in the end.
3BlueHarpyWell I have read this one before but I must say this is one of your better poems Jess. Maybe it's because the emotions behind it are true, I find it funny though that this poem is no longer true. You got to have your friends and him ; they can't hangout together often but you got to keep both in the end.
10/19/2006 c1 17Synthetic Vital Cyber Star
i love your poem it reminds me and wanting to love someone i could just cant have nice play of the words it made me feel like i really there and watching what has happening good job please continue with your work
17Synthetic Vital Cyber Stari love your poem it reminds me and wanting to love someone i could just cant have nice play of the words it made me feel like i really there and watching what has happening good job please continue with your work
10/19/2006 c1 23Forever Forbidden
Wow! Its great and my poem, Bittersweet, is really close to yours in meaning! It's sweet, and your rhyme pattern is good. Keep writing!
23Forever ForbiddenWow! Its great and my poem, Bittersweet, is really close to yours in meaning! It's sweet, and your rhyme pattern is good. Keep writing!