
12/6/2006 c1
35The Fourth Fate
I love how it's told in narrative, yet it's also so abstract. The tone is so... dark and hopeless... Brilliant. I indentify well with it. Finding that line between too childish and too racey. It's so hard. However, you make it beautiful.

I love how it's told in narrative, yet it's also so abstract. The tone is so... dark and hopeless... Brilliant. I indentify well with it. Finding that line between too childish and too racey. It's so hard. However, you make it beautiful.
12/2/2006 c1
77by His blood
oh, fuck. just fuck. i would cry, but i've forgotten how. this makes me hurt. this is me. and it hurts.

oh, fuck. just fuck. i would cry, but i've forgotten how. this makes me hurt. this is me. and it hurts.
11/21/2006 c1
70elvenstorm
This is great. So sad and really makes a point with perfect imagery. Well done x

This is great. So sad and really makes a point with perfect imagery. Well done x
11/9/2006 c1
19lastchance02
It's very well written. I hate writing reviews because they always sound horrible, but how else would i be able to let you know I love your pieces.

It's very well written. I hate writing reviews because they always sound horrible, but how else would i be able to let you know I love your pieces.
10/29/2006 c1
90poetic abortion
Gorgeous. Just, oh my god.
It was beyond what I would expect.
- Noelle

Gorgeous. Just, oh my god.
It was beyond what I would expect.
- Noelle
10/25/2006 c1
54kaylajac
this makes me shiver. you're amazing. especially that first stanza- god, just sosogood.

this makes me shiver. you're amazing. especially that first stanza- god, just sosogood.
10/25/2006 c1
88multiples of six
Oh.. damn.. wow. Not really sure what to say about this,.. it's that good.

Oh.. damn.. wow. Not really sure what to say about this,.. it's that good.
10/24/2006 c1
73Jezsh
Aah I so love it when you write new things :)
This seems so foreboding, like a prelude to a one-shot or something. It's so sultry and almost morbid. Love it.

Aah I so love it when you write new things :)
This seems so foreboding, like a prelude to a one-shot or something. It's so sultry and almost morbid. Love it.
10/20/2006 c1
123dress her up in fairytales
wow, i don't even know what to say about this. speechless - short, simple, but powerful.

wow, i don't even know what to say about this. speechless - short, simple, but powerful.