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5/5/2007 c1 3SocratesCat
Very, very, very good. I don't think any of the experiments - or, the ones I think were experients - failed. Wow.

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10/26/2006 c1 Royal Bliss
Wow very well written it is obvious that you took a lot of time on this. I like how you had specific words in bold between each paragraph. I'm still not sure why some paragraphs are in italics though. But all in all, I really enjoyed reading this.
10/21/2006 c1 akb-inactive
Oh wow... so much emotion here. Wow... I really don't have a lot of words to say because... wow, it was just THAT good. Thanks so much for a great read!

I can't wait for your next parts! :D
10/20/2006 c1 Amy Lynn
Wow. This is just...wow. There are no words.

It's so compelling; I love the emotion here, and the thoughts about how neither of them are exceptional at anything. And it's just so completely GREAT that I can't think of anything else to say.

So, because rambling will cause me to look like an idiot, I shall end my review here.

:)

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