for Autumn Changing11/12/2006 c1 
7Atheneon
I love autumn. Where I live, the fall is short lived (the snow comes too soon). Thank you for giving me that picture in words.
I love your voice. Your haiku are very authentic
7AtheneonI love autumn. Where I live, the fall is short lived (the snow comes too soon). Thank you for giving me that picture in words.
I love your voice. Your haiku are very authentic
10/25/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The sound flow and alliterative aspects work well in this. The reader is caught in the sound, which is good, as it adds to the portrait that you've created.
879Moondog DozierThe sound flow and alliterative aspects work well in this. The reader is caught in the sound, which is good, as it adds to the portrait that you've created.