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11/12/2006 c1 7Atheneon
I love autumn. Where I live, the fall is short lived (the snow comes too soon). Thank you for giving me that picture in words.

I love your voice. Your haiku are very authentic
10/25/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The sound flow and alliterative aspects work well in this. The reader is caught in the sound, which is good, as it adds to the portrait that you've created.
10/24/2006 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Nicely written haiku. I love autumn. Keep it up!
10/24/2006 c1 Galadh Niniel
Lovely simile, and again very graphic and palpable. Like it.
10/23/2006 c1 15liz anya
love the last line.
10/22/2006 c1 9Kalopsia
ah i love this! especially the words "curl" and "gilded treasure." nicely done!
10/22/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Nice imagry, this is well done. A good haiku.

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