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11/4/2006 c1 97Farran
You've realy presented this horrible scene well. Wonderful use of an extended metaphore well done.
10/22/2006 c1 15Greenery
Gorgeous. I love it. It's short and sad, and very good. Great flow and excellent imagery.
10/22/2006 c1 59Frore
Very nice descriptions! I wish everyone were as in depth.
10/22/2006 c1 12newshound
Very well done. That's every city on the planet in a nutshell.
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