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for She Isn't

10/24/2006 c1 44S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G
Wow... thats all I can say. I loved the abstractness. It just sort of... flowed. Very, very good work.
10/24/2006 c1 21Aella88
Nice work. I really liked the last part "You're wanting her to be yours, She isn't she isn't." However, I also liked other lines. Some of them just seemed to flow so perfectly. "Chasing phantoms" "You're going to crash blind, ready ready hit a wall"
10/24/2006 c1 14Darla Gray
I really am entranced by this piece. And yes, the ending stanza really does pull it all together. I love the abstract-ness of it. Truly a lovely poem. Keep up the excellent work! (:
10/22/2006 c1 6Ace Lee Bailey
Absolutly amazing dahling. I love it, a lot.
10/22/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow... haunting. i like how abstract this is, yet in the end it all makes sense

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