for Reach Out11/28/2006 c1 Arafax
Nice poem. The repeated use of 'over' makes this piece hold the emotion well. Nice job.
Nice poem. The repeated use of 'over' makes this piece hold the emotion well. Nice job.
10/24/2006 c1 
9Sakura Taking
This is very original, I like it. It contains a very strong and deep meaning beneath it and the repetition makes it even more powerful. Nice work!
9Sakura TakingThis is very original, I like it. It contains a very strong and deep meaning beneath it and the repetition makes it even more powerful. Nice work!
10/23/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
I really liked this poem. The repetition...it's really powerful. It has strong meaning, and is really original and creative. =) *adds to favourites* Great job!
16brokendreams21I really liked this poem. The repetition...it's really powerful. It has strong meaning, and is really original and creative. =) *adds to favourites* Great job!