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1/15/2007 c1 3Da Vinci at Work
Doppelgangers! Yeah. (Doppelgangers are basically the idea that everyone has more than one side to them. Yup.)

Nice poem.
11/4/2006 c1 89rira-chan
i liked this one very much. i liked how it was written.

~rira-chan
10/24/2006 c1 34Im Not an Angel
great work, really like this one mostly because i can relate...err... hehehee...(",)

just one thing, i dont know if its just me but the format is a bit awkward... what i mean is, the sentence in some lines are incomplete and you have to jump off to the next to finish the idea... oh no that's confusing... aahhm... i noticed it with your other poems too so maybe its just your style...(",)

anyway, all in all really great job(",)!
10/23/2006 c1 59Frore
This is actually deep in it's own simple way. The short verses and use of conflicting adjectives help get the message across. Nice work!
10/23/2006 c1 71Pricilla Grey
Great poem, the last few lines fit perfectly.

- Pricilla Grey

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