
3/14/2007 c1
17life like whoa
The last stanza is so uplifting and inspiring. Very beautiful and even more so true.
And now for the ever inevitable spelling errors haha ^_^
"pugre the words girls and boys have longed..." did you mean
PURGE the words girls and boys have longed...
"away with dimonds that blind." did you mean
away with DIAMONDS that blind.

The last stanza is so uplifting and inspiring. Very beautiful and even more so true.
And now for the ever inevitable spelling errors haha ^_^
"pugre the words girls and boys have longed..." did you mean
PURGE the words girls and boys have longed...
"away with dimonds that blind." did you mean
away with DIAMONDS that blind.
11/7/2006 c1
116createanarchy
i love this poem.
it's great, I totally get the feeling of being an outcast at the risk of sounding emo...it's a great poem
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i love this poem.
it's great, I totally get the feeling of being an outcast at the risk of sounding emo...it's a great poem
x