9/19/2007 c22 64angel1357
Argh... no more updates for a while... but I finished it! With still too hot cocoa sitting on the desk.. yeah sorry about obsessing about, I just have an obsession with it. And to anyone who knows me, me, giving up hot cocoa to sit and read a story when it's raining (which I also love) is like.. the best complement I could give something. So... that's just how much I love this story. I can't wait till you update!
Argh... no more updates for a while... but I finished it! With still too hot cocoa sitting on the desk.. yeah sorry about obsessing about, I just have an obsession with it. And to anyone who knows me, me, giving up hot cocoa to sit and read a story when it's raining (which I also love) is like.. the best complement I could give something. So... that's just how much I love this story. I can't wait till you update!
9/19/2007 c21 angel1357
Argh! They finally kissed, and what does she do, she runs! Can I strangle her, plese? Pretty please? I trangle my own characters all the time when they don't do what I want them to. And then I change it... gah! That's it, I'm going to go get my hot cocoa that's been whistling at me for the past... half chapter and then finish!
Argh! They finally kissed, and what does she do, she runs! Can I strangle her, plese? Pretty please? I trangle my own characters all the time when they don't do what I want them to. And then I change it... gah! That's it, I'm going to go get my hot cocoa that's been whistling at me for the past... half chapter and then finish!
9/19/2007 c20 angel1357
Good good. He lied. Now I'm happy, and no longer confused. Again, really liked. I wish I had more to say, but I don't... and I'll just continue reading!
Good good. He lied. Now I'm happy, and no longer confused. Again, really liked. I wish I had more to say, but I don't... and I'll just continue reading!
9/19/2007 c19 angel1357
Wow... just... wow... I'm thouroughly confused, but I suppose I should be right now. Braden is just... confusing, and needs to think a bit more. I think. And Norah better not say anything about staying with him, or I'll go crazy. Not that I'm all ready not. Anyways... I'm going to break the cliffie now and read the next chapter now..
Wow... just... wow... I'm thouroughly confused, but I suppose I should be right now. Braden is just... confusing, and needs to think a bit more. I think. And Norah better not say anything about staying with him, or I'll go crazy. Not that I'm all ready not. Anyways... I'm going to break the cliffie now and read the next chapter now..
9/19/2007 c18 angel1357
This one was good too. As I said before, I really like the way your going about writing things. I'm getting curious as to why Braden seems to hate Jacob... but I'll see if I find out in the next... 4 chapters. Aww... that's all I have left...
This one was good too. As I said before, I really like the way your going about writing things. I'm getting curious as to why Braden seems to hate Jacob... but I'll see if I find out in the next... 4 chapters. Aww... that's all I have left...
9/19/2007 c17 angel1357
I liked the repeat on this chapter. It was nice to hear Norah's POV, since at the end of the last chapter I was hoping for it. Again, aboslutely adore this story, I find it really good. And don't worry so much about things flowing, or at least now a days don't. all the stuff so far has seemed to flow to me.
I liked the repeat on this chapter. It was nice to hear Norah's POV, since at the end of the last chapter I was hoping for it. Again, aboslutely adore this story, I find it really good. And don't worry so much about things flowing, or at least now a days don't. all the stuff so far has seemed to flow to me.
9/19/2007 c16 angel1357
All right, I've read all of the chapters up until here, and I just decided that I'm going to review every one, cause they are all so wonderful. This one so far had to be my favorite though. Awesome job.
All right, I've read all of the chapters up until here, and I just decided that I'm going to review every one, cause they are all so wonderful. This one so far had to be my favorite though. Awesome job.
8/18/2007 c22 cherry617
wow! i just sat here and read this whole thing! yeah! I so have A.D.D. lol! but update soon! I love this story!
wow! i just sat here and read this whole thing! yeah! I so have A.D.D. lol! but update soon! I love this story!
7/26/2007 c22 DELETETHISACCOUNTPLEASE
dante -_-"
is
an
idiot.
kind of knew that b was either gay/bi though (=
mucho adore the story :D
dante -_-"
is
an
idiot.
kind of knew that b was either gay/bi though (=
mucho adore the story :D
7/25/2007 c22 The Fates03
hey..this has got to be ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! OMG...your such a good writter! I love this story uhh lol...anwyazz keep updating you ARE REALLY REALLY REALLY GODD and this story is EXCELLENT Wohoo
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hey..this has got to be ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING STORIES I HAVE EVER READ! OMG...your such a good writter! I love this story uhh lol...anwyazz keep updating you ARE REALLY REALLY REALLY GODD and this story is EXCELLENT Wohoo
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7/23/2007 c22 1Freakage
How come all the mean girls are named Ella? Weird! Anyways, great story; I absolutely love Braden's character, Dante too. Thanks so much for posting and I'm really looking forward to those last two chapters!
How come all the mean girls are named Ella? Weird! Anyways, great story; I absolutely love Braden's character, Dante too. Thanks so much for posting and I'm really looking forward to those last two chapters!
7/22/2007 c22 1ind-fam
Well, dante sounded like a girl, here. Guys mope in differant way. They take it out physically. They don't sit around and sigh. They play hard.
He will not think it is his mistake. She has rejected him. Apart from tiny sub-conscious feeling that may be he was too soon, he will be angry.
His memories of her will make him more angry and frustrated.
Keep writing...
Well, dante sounded like a girl, here. Guys mope in differant way. They take it out physically. They don't sit around and sigh. They play hard.
He will not think it is his mistake. She has rejected him. Apart from tiny sub-conscious feeling that may be he was too soon, he will be angry.
His memories of her will make him more angry and frustrated.
Keep writing...
7/19/2007 c22 23Kaede Kitsurani
Aw, good luck with the guy! Hope you get him!
Short chapter, but it was great. Braden made me laugh through it all. =) Reminds me of myself. All bi polar like..
Aw, good luck with the guy! Hope you get him!
Short chapter, but it was great. Braden made me laugh through it all. =) Reminds me of myself. All bi polar like..