7/18/2007 c22 1dawn's unforgiving darkness
yay!

7/15/2007 c22 1Defying Destinyy
ah no i wanna no wat the plan is...aw...well so far itz been ah-mazin n u HAVE 2 upload soon im goin crazy!its great i cant wait 4 the plan...this new braden is funni!im relli curious 4 norahz pov...hmm cant wait!

7/10/2007 c22 False-Facade
Update SOON

7/10/2007 c22 4morganelena
Ah!

You. Are. Alive! And you updated!

I think the skies have opened up and I hear a hallelujah chorus.

Hahah. This chapter was pretty good.

No Dante/Norah.

But seeing as how the plot didn't call for it, I understand. :D

But with a bunch of Dante and a hilariously bi Brayden, it's all good. :P

And I don't think I have any questions. I'm just sad that there's only two chapters left! I love this story! I really do! And it will be sad to see it go.

But I hope you have fun in Asia! I've been dying to leave the country, but sadly, I have a mother who is afraid of flying.

So yeah. :P

I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update! And you JUST got out of school? I got out May 29...

Well, either way! You've found a Dante!

I am jealous, I have to say. I really am. :]

Hey, if he has any friends, lemme know.

;)

-Morgan

7/10/2007 c22 24DancingChaChaFruit
Huh. To tell you the truth, I'd pretty much given up on this story. I thought you'd forgotten about it or just didn't want to write it anymore or something. So imagine my shock when I opened my email inbox and saw that this story had been updated! At first, I was thinking you'd just left an author's note but when I saw that it was a real chapter, I was perfectly ecstatic! =D Back in the day, this was nearly one of my favorite stories. I hate to sound mean, but since it's been such a long time, I feel almost as though I'm starting a new story that I have yet to fall in love with. Yet, for some reason, I remember basically everything about the plot and required virtually no rereading to catch up to this chapter. (But maybe if I did reread it, I'd fall in love with it all over again. Hm. Sounds tempting.)

I am glad indeed, though, that you hadn't forgotten about us readers over here waiting to find out what will happen. I'm sorry about all the crap that was going on (especially those exams... meh), but at least it's summer break, now! Celebrate! =) And good luck with your own Dante... you lucky person. *sticks tongue out* I want a Dante.

Anyway, I'm sort of happy and sad at the same time about the fact that there are two chapters left. On the one hand, I'll be glad to finally see some resolution and (hopefully) a happy ending (if it's not happy, I think I will hire private detectives to track you down, and then I'll sneak into your house in the middle of the night with a whip and force you onto your computer to rewrite the ending and make it happy). On the other hand, it basically means no more of the trials of Dante and Norah. No more story, basically =(.

Oh, and have fun in Asia! You lucky duck... again. I WAS going to go to China this summer with my family (my dad goes there on business trips [really random, I know. He's also been to Africa and Belgium. And we live in the USA so...yeah], so we were going to make a family vacation out of it, but we couldn't get the visas in time. So no Asia for me =(. But like I said, you have fun!

Okay, I'll start talking about the chapter now. Lol. Sorry about all that rambling on.

Poor, depressed Dante! =( Ayiyi, what has Norah dear been up to? Skipping her classes? That's very un-Norah-like! She must be depressed too, the poor gal. If she finally confessed her love to Dante, then they could get together and live happily ever after and make little Dantes and Norahs. Uh. Maybe not that last one, but you know.

Not that I don't understand how she's feeling, though. Braden WAS being stupid telling Norah he loved her when he didn't even want to go out with her anymore. Gah. Boys are so stupid, sometimes. But then sometime they're just plain adorable. ;)

Anyway, I'm glad that Braden and Dante sat down and talked, and that Dante told Braden everything. It makes me happy. I just hope, though, that Braden doesn't suddenly become a different person now that he's bi, but there seemed to be no real problem of that in this chapter, so yeah. Are you ever going to explain what was up with that new kid awhile back? Jacob or John or Jason or something that began with a J? Hold on, I'm gonna go check... JACOB! Mwahaha. My first guess was right. I'm am brilliant! Bow down to me!

...Okay, sorry. You can ignore that last bout of weirdness. I'm just surprised I still remember his name. Your story must have made quite an impression on me, then, for me to remember such details for so long. Yes, that's a compliment. You may thank me now. ;)

Once again, you can ignore the weirdness. Sorry. I must be in a really rambling mood, or something. I dunno. It's weird. I mean, yeah, I always leave long, rambling reviews, but this one is, like, the mother of all of those. Exept not really, because I once left a review that was over 800 words. 847, to be exact. I just looked for it in my review history. Because I'm weird like that. And becuase I wanted to make sure that it was actually over 800 words and I wasn't unintentionally lying to you. I hate unintentionally lying to people. Once I told a whole group of people what a word meant, only to discover later that I was COMPLTELY wrong about the defnition, which made me feel REALLY stupid and bad, because now all these people thing the word "bombastic" means something that it dosen't. Ugh.

I apologize once again for that randomness. And I also apologize for the fact that I have to keep apologizing.

Ugh. I'm going now. Thanks for updating, and I'll be excited when you have the chance to update once more! =)

PS. This review is 869 words long, including this part. Feel honored. =P

7/10/2007 c22 iLoveFiction
thank you so much for posting! i was wondering when you were going to post a few days ago. well, i got to say i absoultely love this story and i can't wait 'til the next update! but it's so sad that it's coming to an end! i wonder what Braden's plan's going to be! as always please update soon!

P.S I'm sad to hear that you have been depressed lately, i really hope everythig works out! but i'm happy to hear you found your sorta Dante hopefully he'll ask yo out because you obviously like him alot and i'm sure he likes you too!



~May :)

7/10/2007 c22 1Gwyn Baranof
Well, it is nice to know that you have not died.

This chapter was unexpected. That was not what I was expecting. I saw Dante as the chasing kind of person.

7/10/2007 c22 1goodbyemylover
aww, poor dante, i can't wait till we hear about the plan!

and congratulations on finding your special someone!

have fun in asia!